In Sanity

Jun 03, 2010 23:48


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dark_dwellersim June 4 2010, 18:01:50 UTC
Oooh I love how dark your story looks. This provided an interesting perspective, much different from your prologue, I can't wait to see more connections between them and the characters' lives. :D

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jerzibot June 4 2010, 22:31:46 UTC
Thank you! I think it had to look dark considering it takes place in the wee hours of the morningtide. So far it seems that each chapter is going to be quite contrasting to the preceding. I guess thats how things go when you name a story after the umbrella term for psychiatric afflictions.

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collidingwithme June 5 2010, 09:18:54 UTC
Quentin grew up! I'm glad she's still speaking arr-ish, hehe. It's sad that she (seemed like she) had to move out. :( I wonder what happened to June and Mila though. Did they find Jade? (I hope I didn't get their names mix-ed up :P)

I have to agree with Nicole about how dark the story looked. As in, I kept waiting for something bad to happen but it never did, lol. Thinking too much? XD

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jerzibot June 5 2010, 09:57:12 UTC
Quentin did grow up! Couldn't keep her as a child forever; nor as a teen - she was quite moody then. She'll always be a little arr-ish. After all, she's Captain Quentin of the Bejeweled Buccaneer!
Names are not mixed up. And because I'm a terrible tease, that's all I'm going to say on the matter. xD

Splendid! That's just what I want for this story. The feeling of some sort of impending misfortune. Gotta keep the readers on their metaphorical toes. ;D

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jerzibot June 11 2010, 22:48:39 UTC
The shots never look that great to me, it really means a lot to hear they're being well received by others. My sincerest thank you for finding this bonkers story compelling.

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valpre June 17 2010, 06:11:32 UTC
I finally got down to reading this :) Great writing and fabulous shots. I can't wait to see more of Quentin's character!

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jerzibot June 20 2010, 21:31:21 UTC
Hopefully, there will be more Quentin in the short future. I'm still kind of distracted by life, but Chapter Two is nearly done. I'm working to get it up sometime this week.

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simtopi June 18 2010, 01:10:31 UTC
Now you got me looking for the anti-easter egg. :O Clue please!!! :D

But this is great. I like how you're setting up Quentin's character and the mood. Your pictures are amazing!

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jerzibot June 20 2010, 21:30:22 UTC
It's in one of the last three pictures. Nothing too major, just a little hint about the plot.

Thank you, ever so much. Theres this little part of me that just wants to dive right into things, but I know it would swiftly kerplode in my face if I did. Quentin takes time to explain to people who aren't her. Even I don't completely understand her - and I made her! xD

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