I can’t comment on the pictures since I’m reading this at work and media sharing sites are blocked so I’ll have to wait until I get home to check them. But the writing alone is wonderful as always
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First off, thank you for taking the time to read this. It's difficult to express how much that in itself means to me. The fact that you swiped some time out of your day to make this comment means even more. I'll do my best to answer what I can at the moment
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You know, you make me feel embarrassed of my own writing. (read: I ABSOLUTELY ADORE YOUR THIS!!!) :) I feel so, so sad for Mila my heart aches for her, yet it makes me feel even sadder to hear her mum say "I’ve spent too many years alone in this house." Omg... :( I can understand that if you feel strongly against someone, you would want to stop them from coming closer, but sorry Mila, I think you're being too selfish in this case. It's not like you lived with your mum, you know. Loneliness is a really terrible thing.
Quentin, on the other hand, is still as hilarious as ever. I'm glad her mum caught her before she managed to sneak away. Gah, how could you think of that, even after you've promised Mila?!?! *shakes Quentin by the shoulders*
Oh, dear! Please don't, your writing is absolutely lovely.<3 But I appreciate the compliment. Lots and lots.
Mila's not always too focused on the goings on of people who aren't her. She doesn't entirely recognize that the family she once had has dissolved and moved on. Mostly because she retains these childhood hopes of her sister coming home and everything suddenly snapping back to normal. Maybe she'll eventually realise that this just isn't so, anymore.
Relief! I was a little worried that Quentin's (somewhat) humourous side wasn't being conveyed. Quentin - much like Mila - also has some tendencies to be self-absorbed. However, it's more of a survival thing for her. x]
Ooh, I love this story. Excitement hits with every new chapter and I'm enjoying seeing how several elements enter and take part to the story, can't wait for the next one! :D
Thank you, thank you! I'm absolutely delighted that you're enjoying this. My words are failing me at the moment, but I am ever so happy. =] Hopefully, you shan't have to wait long for the next one. ^^
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Quentin, on the other hand, is still as hilarious as ever. I'm glad her mum caught her before she managed to sneak away. Gah, how could you think of that, even after you've promised Mila?!?! *shakes Quentin by the shoulders*
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Mila's not always too focused on the goings on of people who aren't her. She doesn't entirely recognize that the family she once had has dissolved and moved on. Mostly because she retains these childhood hopes of her sister coming home and everything suddenly snapping back to normal. Maybe she'll eventually realise that this just isn't so, anymore.
Relief! I was a little worried that Quentin's (somewhat) humourous side wasn't being conveyed. Quentin - much like Mila - also has some tendencies to be self-absorbed. However, it's more of a survival thing for her. x]
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Hopefully, you shan't have to wait long for the next one. ^^
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I'll scurry to see what verbal treat you left me on SWG, now. =]
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