Comments | jesaku: 2 Hunters and a Baby Part 1/?

jesaku

2 Hunters and a Baby Part 1/?

Feb 17, 2012 09:58

This is my first fic at LJ. English is not my mother tongue. But i hope my story is readable. My gramar lessons are only a distant memory. At the moment I go with what sounds right. Maybe some onewill offer to be my beta-reader. I hope you'll like my fic ( Read more... )

boys as parents

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lil_jei February 17 2012, 16:02:23 UTC

Hmmm I'll look forward to seeing where you go with this.

jesaku February 17 2012, 16:53:05 UTC

*happy dance*

some one read my fanfiction!

was my english okay?

lil_jei February 17 2012, 17:41:02 UTC

:) If you keep this up and post in other comms you'll probably get more. We're a good lot of readers who give fics at least a chance.

I think it was the format more than the language that was at all iffy. You might try looking for a beta in one of the SPN comms.

But like I said I look forward to more of this fic from you.

Lil

jesaku February 17 2012, 18:21:52 UTC

okay, what do you mean the format was iffy?

I hope i can nake it better next time!?

legion11 February 17 2012, 19:37:40 UTC

It surely sounds promising, please continue!

jesaku February 17 2012, 20:46:32 UTC

I will.

I already posted over 150 chapters at a german board. now i have time to translate it

lil_jei February 22 2012, 16:28:16 UTC

Ouch translating sucks...that much I know. Format wise that's what I meant. How the paragraphs and words are set up mean just as much to a reader's perception of a fic as the words themselves.