The Proper Order of Things

Dec 21, 2004 21:29

            “What time are you leaving for Janis’s?” Bunny asked, readjusting the strap on her messenger bag as she walked down C Street.

“I think in about fifteen minutes,” Jay replied, his voice crackling slightly as Bunny’s cell phone passed under a telephone wire, “I just have to find a bathroom. She told her hers is acting up.”
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Critique anonymous December 28 2004, 18:46:56 UTC
Whoa! I love this story. Jess, your stories are getting bolder all the
time. I found this to be shocking in several places. I thought that
there was little romancing occuring between Janis and Bunny, but I
suppose much of that may have occurred prior to Jay's arrival. I was
very suprised that Jess had Janis calling Bunny a cunt. Do you like
that, Jess? I wonder what Jenn thinks about that.

On a sidenote, when a strap-on worn by a woman has fellatio performed
on it, if it placed properly and the back of the dildo is lubed and
resting on the clitoris of its wearer, I am told that this can be
highly pleasurable.

I love the ending in Nevada City. It really is too bad that we
couldn't read this last wednesday when Jenn and I were together. I
would love to have seen her original reaction. I certainly was
suprised at this story.

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Wow stormyknight January 4 2005, 22:42:33 UTC
This could be your best one yet Jess. Honestly, some of this stuff, I didn't know you had it in you.

Kinda sexy.

Wait.

Forget kinda.

;-)

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Re: Wow jess_bunny January 4 2005, 23:49:28 UTC
Haha, well, I didn't know I had some of this stuff in me either. But, I'm still playing with it. If it comes out, I'll roughly let you know.

Alyssa wants me to post stuff on Literotica.com -- what do you think? I don't know how likely it is that my stuff will be read.

Yeah, you better forget "Kinda" and replace it with "extremely" or I'll do things that you'll never forget!

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Re: Wow stormyknight January 5 2005, 13:42:27 UTC
I don't know anything about literotica.com. But I've noticed that doesn't normally stop someone from offering advice. So I guess, sure, what could it hurt to post it?

Perhaps I should check it out first....

>Yeah, you better forget "Kinda" and replace it with "extremely" or I'll do things that you'll never forget!

Mmmmmm....

Promise?

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Re: Wow jess_bunny January 9 2005, 14:47:14 UTC
Mmmayyybe.

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Yowwwww! anonymous January 9 2005, 14:38:29 UTC
Hot stuff, really steamed up this flatscreen monitor!

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Re: Yowwwww! jess_bunny January 9 2005, 14:47:01 UTC
Thanks, whoever you are!

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