Prologue to....Inspiration part one

[jessesparrow916]

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Prologue
Inspiration
Set during Seventh year and during the War
Rated R to NC-17
Angsty at first, hopefully with a happy ending. This will be a multi chapter fic.
D/Hr

Comments

[eloquentquill]

I really liked it. A lot. :D
I would like to read more, please!

[jessesparrow916]

thank you so much....I'm glad you like it so far...I am working on my first chapter

[eloquentquill]

:D Good!

[jessesparrow916]

I must be clueless

[kazfeist]

Nice start! Is this going to be a sad ending, or a happy one? I vote for the latter...with enough angst to suit the rest of the readership, I guess. I'd set it in Seventh Year, or have them come back after the war's over. I don't particularly like the choice of Astoria, and, if it were me, I'd have Hermione actually become pregnant. Couple typos, extra commas and such, but that may be a coding thing. :D

[jessesparrow916]

undecided...I believe it will be a happy ending...and it is in Seventh Year...In the beginning...Hermione is with Harry and that is all I'm giving away...it will be mostly angst. and the grammatical errors weren't there when I posted it...cause I checked it and my friend dramionejunkie did too....hmmmm....well thank you so much for reading and the new chapter will be up in about a week

[chanteur_dombre]

This is a great start!

Hope you'll keep going.

[jessesparrow916]

thank you so very very much for commenting on my story...I will keep going...promise..