Fanfiction: In Each Other's Arms

May 17, 2012 18:05

This is my first fanction in so very long. Since August, I think? Oh, how shameful! For someone who loves to both read and write (especially Arashi fanfiction), I certainly haven't been doing much of either one. I've been struggling with myself to write something with more substance for years, but haven't hit a wall quite like this. Hopefully, with ( Read more... )

fic: oneshot, p: ohno x aiba

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gemmiesky May 17 2012, 22:58:48 UTC
Katz Cafe.. I still laugh over how crazy our conversation about that single detail got :)

Keep at it.. you write well.. as you are so fond of telling me, don't let yourself get in your way :)

And we can take any single pairing/idea and do this again anytime.. I think its fun ^^

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jessibear_kun May 18 2012, 03:28:55 UTC
You notice I changed it. Katz sounded... more appropriate. :) Thank you, Jamie. Next time, instead of telling you, I'll just take the advice from both of us and simply go for it.

What shall be next? We've already decided who, now what will they be doing?

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gemmiesky May 18 2012, 03:49:14 UTC
lol I did~ and you're welcome! Yup, just close your eyes and go for it :D

Wait, what?? When did we decide on who?? lol to skype I go~ lol

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doctoggy May 18 2012, 01:20:08 UTC
I still love this one. Something moving about ohno's process of remembering. and all the things that are hinted at and not said

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jessibear_kun May 18 2012, 02:00:53 UTC
Thank you. Really. I took the lazy way out and, instead of actually improving the areas that needed work, I simply omitted the most noticeable flaws. Still, I like writing from Ohno's point of view. The last three attempts to write have all been focused on him or through his eyes.

Didn't you have something you wished to share with me? Or maybe I pried.

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doctoggy May 19 2012, 01:37:27 UTC
its been so.... crappy and chaotic here that i cant recall what i said i was going to message you about. just that i was. but if you remember, i can tell you.

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jessibear_kun May 19 2012, 02:01:39 UTC
Don't worry about it. My inbox in empty, though looking through my sent mail didn't help me remember. It was something you had written and planned to e-mail me that hadn't been posted, but maybe not. I could confusing things with other people... >.>

How are you? It's been a while. It seems you're busy again?

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nekochan_lia May 18 2012, 02:31:37 UTC
i really love the choice of words and the feeling that comes from the words
it's beautiful <3

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jessibear_kun May 18 2012, 03:25:05 UTC
Thank you. I revised this one quite a bit. lol And thank you for reading~ ♥

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misatsuki May 18 2012, 05:17:36 UTC
This fic is so beautiful. I just want to shower Oh-chan with so much hugs.
*showers you with cookies*

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jessibear_kun May 18 2012, 05:46:54 UTC
*dances in shower of cookies* Arigatou~ I'm really glad you liked it. Had to do Jamie's idea justice, you know? :D

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ichi_toshimiya May 18 2012, 09:54:22 UTC
LOVE this, sooooo sweet. love the language, the story, everything. i could feel ohno's feeling too. his fear and happiness. at the end, both just being awesomely pure. thanks for writing. hope you will keep writing.

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jessibear_kun May 18 2012, 15:08:54 UTC
Wow, really? Thank you! I'm really glad to hear the language is okay. My writing style is a bit rusty as of late, haha. And I'll do my best to write something else.

Thank you for reading~ :)

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