Comments | jessica_romance: 2 for 1

jessica_romance

2 for 1

Apr 12, 2008 11:53

Title: Saved
Author: Jessica_Romance
Pairing/band: William/Gabe, William/M. Shadows & Travis
Rating: R for now.
Warnings: Memories of violence.
Notes: Posted on Mibba.
Summary: William got away...for now.
He doesn't know how long its going to last...this time.William finds friendship in the form of a blueberry muffin and coffee; saved by the man in the purple ( Read more... )

frank iero, ferard, william beckett, gerard way, gabe saporta, gabilliam

Comments 2

thecaley April 18 2008, 00:21:15 UTC

So... I realized today that I forgot to comment on this when I read it. I was checking to see if there was another chapter up, and there wasn't, and I was kinda sad. But yeah, anyways...
I lovelovelove your setup for the first one. It's the right amount of suspense and story, and it's eloquent~
My favorite part is, without a doubt, the very last line. <3~
The second one was good. I'm not really an MCR fic person myself, but I figured it couldn't hurt to read it if I was going to comment, and I liked it. It was kindasorta REALLY adorable, and I laughed at the murderer part.

So... I guess my point is that you're amazing and should write the next chapter(s) soon? <333

jessica_romance April 25 2008, 01:10:42 UTC

I updated Saved =]