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[jessieduck]

“God. My Dad is such an asshole sometimes” Vikki sighed as she shuffled through her purse, looking for lip gloss; her reddish-brown hair fell forward on either side of her face. She had a perfect olive skin tone, and Wes could see a hint of it peeking out through the strands of hair on her neck. He let his eyes follow the smooth line of her neck

Comments

[oh_how_funny]

Wow, I really liked that one, I didn't know it was going to turn like that half way through. I guess criticism wise It jumped abruptly from the stage freak out to the next morning but that's not even a criticism because dramatic effect- wise it was jarring and therefor worked. Well done, I was a big fan of this one.

[jessieduck]

Thanks pal. I take your comment highly? Thats not the word, or what I'd like to say. Its one of those times where you know what you want to say, but it never makes sense when you say it. :D

[justrob07]

Oh wow! This is great, I loved reading it so much :D
Have you ever read Neil Gaimans American Gods?

[jessieduck]

I hope my professor enjoys it that much! :D

I cant say I have, I'm assuming its good though?

[justrob07]

I'm sure he will if not then his a fool ;)
Yeah its very good and I think you might like the style of writing

[oh_how_funny]

I understand what you mean, also I second the opinion Neil Gaiman's American Gods is awesome, also Good Omens by Neil Gaiman and Terry Pratchett is brilliant. Later alligator.