the syntax of beginnings ► prologue

[jesuisfortis]

title: one man army
characters: draco/harry (harry potter)
word count: 1.902 words
warnings: this is only the prologue for a fic that will have chapters. if you like the premise, feel free to friend me for updates.
summary: a handshake that comes before anything else might be a valuable enough start for a friendship.

Comments

[guardiancastiel]

Alas, I said earlier today I would never/could never read Draco/Harry but here I am wanting more ;)

You write beautifully and I can totally see how a different initial meeting of these two could totally turn their lives into something different than J.K's original work.

I am really interested.

[jesuisfortis]

i'm so glad that i could get your interest even though you're not the biggest fan of the pairing! it's a possibility that always stroke me as... well, interesting, to say the last, and i'm thrilled that you're interested! ♥

[atypeofdiety]

cannot wait for more. I rarely read draco/harry stories but this seems to get interestiing along the way^^

[jesuisfortis]

thank you so much! the other comment i got was also from someone who didn't exactly love the pairing, i'm just so happy that you guys gave it a shot anyway ♥ thank you thank you thank you!

[atypeofdiety]

I like the pairing, actually (hey..they are soooo obsessed with one another xD)...but the stories I read were horribly bad,so...I stopped reading them and went over to dramione. *shrugs*
and now...I´ll read chapter one^^

[jesuisfortis]

yep, they are! never before had i seen a couple of people who're so focused on each other, tsk tsk tsk. i have read a couple of bad ones myself, enough to scar me for some pairings (hello, anything with ginny!), so i know where you're coming from.

alsoooo, dramione! they used to be my otp, and also the first fic i ever read (and wrote) was of this pairing. i used to be so obsessed. lol

ty ♥