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Sep 03, 2005 21:08

My first foray into the spoken poetry genre ( Read more... )

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mortalsimi September 4 2005, 02:04:06 UTC
FUCK yeah!

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faeryangel September 4 2005, 02:15:05 UTC
Nice.

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jettboi September 4 2005, 05:19:24 UTC
I don't necessarily consider it done yet. I might do some more tweaking. But if I don't, do you think it would be long enough for No Shame? I'm afraid it's not the epics that other people do there.

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faeryangel September 4 2005, 20:35:01 UTC
it might need to be a little longer but don't make it bad just to be long if you know what I mean. And one time it was a guys turn and he just stood up either at his chair or up front and said somthing that took maybe ten seconds to say and sat down. And I'm glad you are trying to stay here. but I know from talking with you it has to be tough.

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rebelreject September 4 2005, 03:40:23 UTC
; )

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engnyath September 4 2005, 14:21:27 UTC
awesome! makes me want to stand up and fight:)

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bella_rivolta September 5 2005, 08:01:02 UTC
i said i wouldn't do this, that my response would be private, that i didn't need to say this to the world...

fuck it.

you try so hard. the world sneers and spits and glares, and you walk as tall as your pride will allow. you take my hand, and you take it all. you take and you take and you take...and now, you give. you spit out the fuck you, and you sneer at all those who think GLB should be enough, and you learn to glare right back because somewhere inside, you know you've been pushed too far to stop now.

you are BRILLIANT, and i cannot even begin to believe that the universe was gracious enough to put that adorable boy from the coffeeshop in my bed.

i love you, i love you, i love you...a million times, i love you.

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