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[jewbagel03]

I'm in one of those wierd moods when I write stories. I don't think this one's any good. Thoughts

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[anonymous]

I like that part about the cable.

[srb846]

It's pretty good, I think. The specific details seem to capture the random state of mind that you would most likely be in if you were about to die. I also like the transitions between what's actually happening versus his random thoughts. Good job.

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[bigstupid]

Yo boss, nice story, sounds very Chuck Palahniuk, also sounds very josh rehak though. How you been? Ill talk to you later-- Pat