Comments | jewliebebe: Melting under the crimson sun

jewliebebe

Melting under the crimson sun

Jun 19, 2004 15:27

Twisting and turning in the darkness, my sheets are plastered to my skin. A cold sweat and goose bumps travel up my spine, as I shiver my mind slowly becomes submerged into never ending blackness. Swiftly, I fall down into the depths before me, reaching out for a way to stop the inevitable. I scream for a savior to come and rescue me, only to hear ( Read more... )

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creative indeed... imbored1023 June 19 2004, 14:04:33 UTC

well written. i agree that you have the power to control your future, and it seems that you have put the past behind you somewhat. a bit eerie, but overall well done. im inspired...

yay anonymous June 20 2004, 11:01:19 UTC

Bravo! although ther were a few wurds my blonde-self has yet to figure out but it wuz great...lol...the future shall b a bright one..especially wit my partner in crime *wink wink* standing besides me....I LOVE YOU!..n together we shall ROCK the world....hehe cant wait to c u...u best be out here tomorrow!!!
xoxo
~L

anonymous June 20 2004, 16:35:41 UTC

wow that was pretty boring...jesus. try not to exaggerate so much

dick slave4rage17 June 22 2004, 17:41:02 UTC

wow shut the fuck up, don't be a dick to her. she puts her emotions into a peice of writing and u just stomp on it.