LJ Idol Week 36 - Quick fire

[jexia]

Mama Bear looked around her house and scowled. She'd spent all morning cleaning the cottage, but it looked nearly as bad as when she'd started. The cracked windows and the rusty red roof let in too much dirt, and she just couldn't get it clean. She growled, and tossed her rag into a corner

Comments

[bleodswean]

Quite a rewrite! :)

[jexia]

Thank you!

[halfshellvenus]

Hold on. The Three Bears are running a meth enterprise in their kitchen? Though Goldy was really the only creepy part of this stories-- I could understand the bears' motivation!

[ext_2828400]

Something I just noticed:

"They shook on the deal, his furry paw engulfing hers."

Goldy has a furry paw too?

[jexia]

Nice spotting! Thanks!