Mine.

[jiia_chan]

Hurrah for Gavincest! This is much longer than I anticipated, and also took much longer to write than I thought it would, as my enter key decided to pop off halfway through, and also I suck at writing porn. -.-

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They think he’s theirs.

All these silly little screaming women, reaching up to grasp at his coat-tails, as if they deserved some part

Comments

[stillarium]

Wow, I really enjoyed reading this, you did so well! While I was at the end I was getting goosebumps all over x_x; I'm usually not a fan of Kristoph, but you made me like him. I can so imagine everything like this and really felt for him... maybe because I dislike Klavier/Ema. I can imagine it so well... and the end is just sad and in a way unsatisfying, just like the end of Apollo Justice, at least considering the relationship of the Gavins. =(

[jiia_chan]

I'm sorry it was unsatisfying. But thanks. That's kind of the way I felt about it too. -.- Nothing ended in any way well for the Gavins.
(And yeah... I don't really like Klavier/Ema either, but I needed someone to ship him with, and Apollo didn't work because they hadn't met yet. -.- And also it is my headcannon that Ema has a crush on him and that is why she hates him oh so very much. ^.^)

[anonymous]

(A bit late here...^^;; )

But just letting you know, I LOVED IT~
The character portrayals and actions were very wonderfully written- Kristoph with just the right amount of insanity, and Klavier a sort of submissiveness at first until he finally breaks free in the end. And I love (in a morbid way) how Kristoph was still trying to "teach" him a lesson in the end.
Oh, and I ship Klavier/Ema, so it all works out for me. XDD

[jiia_chan]

Thank you! ^.^ I'm glad you liked it. Especially considering I really had no idea what I was doing or where this was going up until I was already writing it, going 'wtf how did this turn into Klavier/Ema?!'
But yeah. Somehow, I imagine Kristoph as being kind of like a really, really screwed up version of Obi Wan, one part 'you shall learn the ways of the force, so that you may succeed in life and make me proud,' and two parts 'if you don't do what I say I will rip your heart out through your esophagus. With my mind.'

I really, really want some Jedi Phoenix Wright p0rn now. 0.0

[anonymous]

Woww, I must say that I have read most of your fanfics and I really liked this one. I also DID go "wtf Klavier / Ema?!" because I'm not a fan of that myself, haha. Really good story though ... ;D