Title: Chapter Three: Two Guests
Pairing/Characters: Kal-El, Bruce Wayne, Kara Zor-El
Notes: "
The House of the Earth" is an AU in which a few thousand Kryptonians escaped the destruction of Krypton to flee to Earth and enslave its people.
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1800
Summary: Two guests to the El household--one invited and one not.
Kal hovered
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I was going to say more about how imperious Kara is here, how I don't care for her parents at all, and how Kal's preoccupation is getting dangerous -- but the ending just stole the moment.
OMGx3! This is turning out so deliciously well. You have seriously gotten me on tenterhooks! Yay!
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Not at all, it was a total fluke XD
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I think maybe because that little bit of secrecy between them is something almost intimate and I like that and it's also a symbol of the fact that Kal tried to protect him from getting in trouble.
*purrs* Yes, I liked that little tiny bit of shared secrecy as well. It's a small connection, but a valid one, I think. Everything has to start somewhere. :)
When I realized Kal's childhood friend was Selina, this arc totally took off. When she demands to be in a fic, she really demands it. :) I think she stays really important in later arcs as well, althnough the next chapter is her only appearance in this arc.
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