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The House of the Earth: Two Guests (3/7)

Jun 21, 2008 16:35

Title: Chapter Three:  Two Guests
Pairing/Characters: Kal-El, Bruce Wayne, Kara Zor-El
Notes: " The House of the Earth" is an AU in which a few thousand Kryptonians escaped the destruction of Krypton to flee to Earth and enslave its people.
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1800
Summary: Two guests to the El household--one invited and one not.

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jij June 21 2008, 11:10:35 UTC
Oh, I'm glad you're liking it so far! I've had a blast writing it, and Selina is just...*loves her*

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stinglikeabee June 21 2008, 08:35:04 UTC
OMG!

I was going to say more about how imperious Kara is here, how I don't care for her parents at all, and how Kal's preoccupation is getting dangerous -- but the ending just stole the moment.

OMGx3! This is turning out so deliciously well. You have seriously gotten me on tenterhooks! Yay!

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jij June 21 2008, 11:11:53 UTC
LOL! You used that icon back when Kal was just starting to remember Selina and I was wondering if you were hinting to me that you had guessed. :) *hearts Selina*

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stinglikeabee June 21 2008, 15:39:16 UTC
I was wondering if you were hinting to me that you had guessed.

Not at all, it was a total fluke XD

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ladybugkay June 21 2008, 08:51:12 UTC
Selina?! Wow, I never saw that one coming, not even with the 'Kitten' remark. I was thinking along the lines of Bruce having a twin, or something, but this is an even more intriguing idea.

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jij June 21 2008, 11:13:00 UTC
*grin* Selina's a Gotham girl, and I'm trying to keep most people more or less where they would have been born, so...she seemed a good choice. I haven't written her for quite a while and I do love her so...

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cavaleira June 21 2008, 08:51:16 UTC
Sweet, I love that Selina is making an appearance and that she's still a total badass :) This story is great, I'm very drawn into the world you're creating here.

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jij June 21 2008, 11:14:15 UTC
I haven't written Selina for a while, and I love her very much here. She is just a joy to write... *bounces* I'm glad you're liking it so far!

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bengleman June 21 2008, 09:32:40 UTC
Gaaaaaah! Ooooh Amazing- I SO did not see that coming and I do so love Selina (and her interactions with Bruce) and this makes me so amazingly happy *spasms with joy* !!!!!!

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jij June 21 2008, 11:15:47 UTC
Selina is one of my favorite women in the DCU, and I don't take the chance to write her very often, so...when I needed a Gotham girl to be friends with a young Kal, I just couldn't resist. I like them together, in an odd way. *looks forward to the Superman/Catwoman crossover DC has coming up*

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bengleman June 21 2008, 17:12:01 UTC
I think that I should specify that there are OTHER things that I loved about this too- Selina just kinda stole the show there didn't she :D ( ... )

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jij June 22 2008, 12:47:05 UTC
Selina does tend to grab the chapter and run with it, lol. But I'm very glad to hear you like Kara as well! Those touches of...humane-ness, perhaps, do show through a bit, I think.

I think maybe because that little bit of secrecy between them is something almost intimate and I like that and it's also a symbol of the fact that Kal tried to protect him from getting in trouble.

*purrs* Yes, I liked that little tiny bit of shared secrecy as well. It's a small connection, but a valid one, I think. Everything has to start somewhere. :)

When I realized Kal's childhood friend was Selina, this arc totally took off. When she demands to be in a fic, she really demands it. :) I think she stays really important in later arcs as well, althnough the next chapter is her only appearance in this arc.

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