Comments | jij: FIC: The Jewel in the Lotus (3/8)

jij

FIC: The Jewel in the Lotus (3/8)

Jul 24, 2008 19:08

Title: The Jewel in the Lotus 3/8
Pairing/Characters: Clark/Bruce
Notes: "Music of the Spheres" is a series set in the combined universes of "Batman Begins" and "Superman Returns." Other stories and notes on the series here.
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Bruce meets with Lavender Lee, goes to yet another party, and greets the dawn with his lover.
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fic, mots

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jij July 24 2008, 22:38:55 UTC

Thanks! And you do such a great job of summing up why Bruce can be a hero...thanks for that too. :)

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jij July 24 2008, 22:41:41 UTC

Thank you! Bruce feeling angsty over his parents is...not exactly a ground-breaking plot, so it's been kind of a challenge to write! *grin*

I really enjoyed the image of them greeting the sun together as well, it kind of just came to me and seemed a good way to end the chapter. *hugs* Thanks for commenting on it!

ymfaery July 24 2008, 18:23:50 UTC

Yay to Clark for taking care of Bruce! And yay for recovering Dr. Sugiyama (even if he did make Bruce a bit upset)! :D

I have to wonder if Ms. Lee knows about the effects of that perfume on folks, since it doesn't sound like Ivy in disguise and she seems to know that more exposure to the perfume would be... helpful.

jij July 25 2008, 03:09:03 UTC

I couldn't resist putting Sugiyama back in for a scene to reassure myself. :)

Lavender isn't Ivy (I couldn't quite imagine she'd be able to disguise herself well enough, even though she manages it all the time in canon, lol), but she may well be in on the game. :)

bradygirl_12 July 24 2008, 18:35:38 UTC

Beautiful, Jen! Romantic and woobie and lovely. :)

I felt for Bruce and his pain over fearing he's letting down the family name.

And Clark sweeping him up and carrying him to bed...how Rhett and Scarlett! ;) But wonderfully done. Bruce needs Clark to take charge now and again.

And greeting the sunrise together is a lovely, lovely moment.

jij July 25 2008, 03:10:55 UTC

Rhett and Scarlett, lol! Wayne Manor is rather like Tara in some ways, isn't it? Bruce is being very obliging with the woobie in this one. Of course, I have to indiduously drug him to get it, but any port in a storm. :)

bradygirl_12 July 25 2008, 20:58:59 UTC

LOL, Tara is correct! *nudges away cracky plot bunnies*

batfan_sarah July 24 2008, 20:07:28 UTC

FLUFF LOVE.

made of yay :)

jij July 25 2008, 07:58:10 UTC

Woot! Fluffy sunrise watching makes me happy and I wanted to share...