Comments | jiji_bean: Better 10/?

jiji_bean

Better 10/?

Sep 05, 2011 22:44

They walked up the flights of stairs in similar silence as before except that their hands were clasped tightly since exiting the car. Rose found this interesting - she held onto his touch greedily, equally afraid of letting go and holding on. She was nervous about what would eventually come from their conversation.

What would he ask? She wondered. ( Read more... )

human doctor, ten, fanfic, doctor who, better, rose tyler

Comments 18

rosetylersale September 6 2011, 06:50:40 UTC

NOOOOOOOOOOO! MOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!

jiji_bean September 10 2011, 03:42:45 UTC

I PROMISE THERE WILL BE!

:) Please don't hit me. :D

phoenikxs September 6 2011, 08:09:41 UTC

Another great chapter. And yet another mean cliffhanger ;)

jiji_bean September 10 2011, 03:39:48 UTC

Thank you :) I know, these cliffhangers are vicious aren't they hehehe ;)

alexisnihilist September 6 2011, 09:19:58 UTC

I'm not going to hate you... as long as you'll add next chapter sometime soon :D

Oh those poor little confused people. They know it, we know it, people in different galaxies know it, but they're still trying to act like it isn't true... Amazing chapter, by the way.

jiji_bean September 10 2011, 03:36:01 UTC

When I finished the last line, all I kept thinking was..."Oh, they are gonna hate me for a bit" hehe it will be up soon I promise!

Can you imagine just how confused they must have been? But they just need to be together. Thank you for the compliment and for reading :)

the_silverdoe September 6 2011, 10:40:18 UTC

The bit about them being married in another galaxy was so sweet. I liked the cliffhanger, but please, post the next chapter soon, I'm already impatient! =)

jiji_bean September 10 2011, 03:34:53 UTC

I liked adding that part because I had never really thought of AU them before. It made me want to write about them.

Next chapter will be up soon I promise! :)

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jiji_bean September 10 2011, 02:52:23 UTC

:) Realistic - yes! That's what I want. They can't just jump into something, event though they very much want to. It's sad though - being given what you want, but not exactly.

I added the part about their duplicates during my last edit. I just envision these alternate Doctor & Rose individuals in different worlds - but somehow always together.

I'm happy you enjoyed it :) And thanks for trusting me! I can't cause these characters anymore pain than what they've been through.