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jiji_bean

Thunder & Lightning (1/1)

Sep 10, 2011 23:38

Title: Thunder & Lightning (1/1)
Pairing: Nine/Rose
Rating: PG
Timeline: Series 1; before Captain Jack
Summary: Rose and the Doctor take a walk during a rainstorm
A/N: Written for the prompt "lightning storm" given by bluedragonhawk; I hope you like it!

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fanfic, doctor who, nine, rose tyler

Comments 10

bloose09 September 11 2011, 17:06:50 UTC

Another beautiful sweet for us to enjoy. The Doctor is so lost in Rose and willingly so. He can never be annoyed with her for very long. He loves her without limits and you write that so well.

Loved these lines, as they are so Nine/Rose:
“I told you,” he heard her whisper.

Even through the rushing of the rain, he could hear her whisper. He would hear it anywhere.

Yes, yes he would.

jiji_bean September 23 2011, 23:29:03 UTC

He totally would - thank you so much for enjoying my story!

alakuriel September 11 2011, 22:32:36 UTC

Oh, now that's just lovely - short and incredibly sweet! You write them very well. I especially loved this bit: The Doctor felt a pang of relief followed by his temper flaring. He was about to say something when Rose’s bright smile stopped him. In fact, he found himself smiling in return. The poor Doctor - he doesn't stand a chance against that smile! :D

jiji_bean September 23 2011, 23:28:40 UTC

Thank you so much :D really appreciate it!

And that smile? Not a chance :D

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jiji_bean September 23 2011, 22:27:54 UTC

lol I think that's my favorite part - he's so funny without really trying ha.

Thank you!

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jiji_bean September 14 2011, 02:07:48 UTC

Hehehe, I love the visual of Nine just worrying and pacing. Then convincing himself out of it and then back into it again. ha.

I'm glad you pointed out the sensuality in those lines! The rain mixed with a gentle touch under the leather *shivers*

Thank you! And I promise more Nine/Rose in the future!

emraldeyedauter September 23 2011, 12:47:19 UTC

“It’s raining and there is a spectacular lightning storm going on. Let’s go watch.” She rushed towards him and pulled on his sleeve urging him to move. He smiled at her childishness.

“What, so I can look like a drowned rat like you? No thanks.”

But he followed her anyway.

LOve those lines. The all knowing doctor ready to follow a human. Yeah he's smitten

jiji_bean September 23 2011, 17:52:02 UTC

hehehe He is extremely smitten - ha, like he'd let her go. Gosh, I miss Nine *sighs dreamily*