What an amazing start Jill. I feel like I know your characters already and I slowly falling in love with our shy, awkward Talson.
I love the backdrop and plot you've created for this. I would never have dreamed up such an intrinsicate plot. Already it sounds well thought out, and well developed.
Can't wait for Talson's lunch date with Rita. And aw, Sabine is such a dear.
Good Job Jill! What an imaginative idea for a story. The environment these people live in is a testament to your creative, twisted mind. LOL!!! I also love Talson already ;) He's cute. LOL @ him forgetting to take his goggles off. You'd think someone would have told him. Looks like he has found a true friend in Rita. Can't wait to see what happens at the "date".
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I love the backdrop and plot you've created for this. I would never have dreamed up such an intrinsicate plot. Already it sounds well thought out, and well developed.
Can't wait for Talson's lunch date with Rita. And aw, Sabine is such a dear.
The Smith's house looks marvelous :-)
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Rita gets her "date", and we learn more about Talson in the next chapter.
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I hope he opens up some to Rita! I agree, he needs a wife!
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What an imaginative idea for a story. The environment these people live in is a testament to your creative, twisted mind. LOL!!!
I also love Talson already ;) He's cute. LOL @ him forgetting to take his goggles off. You'd think someone would have told him.
Looks like he has found a true friend in Rita. Can't wait to see what happens at the "date".
A new type of simbot, huh? Interesting...
I wonder what these "Darklings" are.
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