It was so interesting to catch a glimpse of a day in Sabine's life. I'm still amazed at the amount of detail you keep putting into the plot development. Very inspiring.
Aw, I found it so sad when Talson realized Tessa's fear of being dismantled. He seems to be so in tune with her emotions, while she, on the other hand is in tune with his intellectual side. Interesting idea is forming in my head. Or maybe it's been there for a while, I'm only now starting to pay attention to it.
I loved the transition to the Cabaret Gothique scene, skilfully done.
I can't wait to see more of the side storyline with Guy.
I loved hearing more about Sabine's work. All those pictures you use of the Steam Punk stuff are awesome! LOL@ Vid's little crush on Tessa. It was a cute touch.
I don't want to say too much, but i think the argument between Talson and PT is very telling. You see more of Talson the man, then just Talson the scientist. He is starting to consider things in not just black and white. His reluctance to tamper with Tessa when she seems to be in a vulnerable state is very telling.
I love how you showed that memories, even ones we try to bury can resurface with the right catalyst. The song bringing talson right back to his past with his little sister. He must have such strong emotions, be they guilt, hurt or something else, to feel he needs to bury them so deep.
There's my Guy :-X I am excited for his story line to be revealed. Who is he really working for? Who is this mysterious Jay and why is his sister dancing in Arlo's club and isn't it interesting his reaction to her. I CAN"T WAIT!!!!
Guy's story is very catching. I am drawn to see what happens with it.
Vid having a crush on Tessa is so cute! I hope that Talson doesn't go through with the deprograming it might break Vid's heart...plus I like her human like side.
Thanks, Guys! I'm glad everyone is liking this so far, and I hope I don't disappoint!
Guy was supposed to be a little one shot cameo, but as soon as Holley emailed him to me, I knew he needed a bigger role. I'm absolutely in love with him! I could easily write a whole story just for him. (and Toothpick, of course!)
The next chapter was SO hard for me to write - Kudos to Holley for putting up with my constant revisions and unsurety. Talson was pretty mad when we left him, and the next chapter is going to pick up from there.
Hopefully, I can get the pics going on it soon! Thanks again for reading, everyone!
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Aw, I found it so sad when Talson realized Tessa's fear of being dismantled.
He seems to be so in tune with her emotions, while she, on the other hand is in tune with his intellectual side. Interesting idea is forming in my head. Or maybe it's been there for a while, I'm only now starting to pay attention to it.
I loved the transition to the Cabaret Gothique scene, skilfully done.
I can't wait to see more of the side storyline with Guy.
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I loved hearing more about Sabine's work. All those pictures you use of the Steam Punk stuff are awesome!
LOL@ Vid's little crush on Tessa. It was a cute touch.
I don't want to say too much, but i think the argument between Talson and PT is very telling. You see more of Talson the man, then just Talson the scientist. He is starting to consider things in not just black and white. His reluctance to tamper with Tessa when she seems to be in a vulnerable state is very telling.
I love how you showed that memories, even ones we try to bury can resurface with the right catalyst. The song bringing talson right back to his past with his little sister. He must have such strong emotions, be they guilt, hurt or something else, to feel he needs to bury them so deep.
There's my Guy :-X I am excited for his story line to be revealed. Who is he really working for? Who is this mysterious Jay and why is his sister dancing in Arlo's club and isn't it interesting his reaction to her.
I CAN"T WAIT!!!!
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Why is Vid so cute? He wants to marry Tessa!
I'm with Val, Guy's story seems very interesting! I don't think he can call her "toothpick" anymore!
Love how he ended up in the bed with her ;)
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Vid having a crush on Tessa is so cute! I hope that Talson doesn't go through with the deprograming it might break Vid's heart...plus I like her human like side.
Excited for more :)
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Guy was supposed to be a little one shot cameo, but as soon as Holley emailed him to me, I knew he needed a bigger role. I'm absolutely in love with him! I could easily write a whole story just for him. (and Toothpick, of course!)
The next chapter was SO hard for me to write - Kudos to Holley for putting up with my constant revisions and unsurety. Talson was pretty mad when we left him, and the next chapter is going to pick up from there.
Hopefully, I can get the pics going on it soon!
Thanks again for reading, everyone!
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