I Like the Way You Move, Part 4/4

[jinkibumiminho]

Title: I Like the Way You Move, Part 4/4
Author: mimi_oly
Rating: NC-17
Pairing/Focus: Onew/Kyuhyun/Eunhyuk
Word count: Part Four: 2750. Total, 8000.
Genre: Friendship, Smut
Summary: Jinki asks Hyukjae for help with his dancing and gets more of an education than he bargained for. Set in April/May 2010.

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Comments

[kyttenfae]

SPOT for tomorrow when I can read and comment and stuff since now I have to go to bed because I have (I hope) a JOB and stuff! But YAY cause I justk now this fic is going to be awesome (also I know this cause Tiff was squeeing like anything over it last night on the phone kekeke).

[jinkibumiminho]

Awww...squee worthy?
Take your time, sweetie!

[onewlurver]

Oh my goodness! I loved this story so so much O.O The tension that you built up between Kyuhyun and Jinki was fantastic, and the fact that Hyukjae was able to benefit from all of their sexual frustrations was epic. Thank you for writing this despite the fact that I'm not a huge SuJu fan.

[jinkibumiminho]

Thank you so much for the nice comment! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[imvus]

I have to say shamelessly that I liked it. :)

I was worried there was something else going on and I'm glad it turned out the way it did. (can't mess with jinki bb) and as I said I like kyu so putting these two together worked for me.

Kyu really was very affectionate in those videos wasn't he....?

[jinkibumiminho]

Re: video. I squealed like the fangirl I am and raped the replay button trying to see what was going on. Jinki must have had something on his face, whether it was satsuma juice or whatever...but I'm so accustomed to seeing Kyu as the evil maknae that that bit of tenderness stuck with me. BTW, I've seen him do the same gentle chin grab with Hyuk!

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[acornmama]

You did it!!! You finished and what a story it is! I read it through and am commenting here at the end. I hope that is okay?

It was fantastic. From beginning to end it was well done. I like the back story that gave them all a reason for being together. I love the dark puppet master Hyukjae. I especially appreciate the obedient yet a tad snarky Kyuhyun.

Jinki poor baby was so set up. Lesson one was hot and lesson two was lovely. And when Kyu turned him to Hyukjae, I was all but drooling.
Jinki's voice an octave lower? Hoo boy.
Aww and the jealousy, and the yearning. I had thought it was going to be a threesome, but it was kind of Hyuk to leave them to it.
The end was sweet. Kyu and Jinki are sweet together.

[jinkibumiminho]

Thank for the thoughtful comment! I'm really glad you enjoyed what finally settled out of my brain.

Yes, I had originally planned a three-way smut fest, but IRL, Hyuk is a church-going good boy (who moonlights as a wiry, thrusting dance machine), so I couldn't see him participating in any serious penetration beyond "helping a brother out." [as much as I would love to see him in a four way with Hae/Siwon/Sungmin]

I was going to keep going through the SM The Ballad era, but this seemed like a good place to wrap it up. Maybe I'll do an epilogue.

Thanks for reading!

[acornmama]

Okay now I want the fourway with Hae, Siwon, and Sungmin. Imagine the issues that Siwon and Hyukjae would have!?!

And honestly please, don't let the churchgoing stop you, some of the biggest sluts I know are churchgoers. I went to Catholic School all my life so believe when I tell you that just means that we are the freakiest of them all.

[jinkibumiminho]

I read a Q&A once where Hyuk mentioned something about homosexuality being a sin (although the Q&A could have been faked), plus there was a TV show that followed him to his mom's church, etc. He also had a well-publicized vow to stay away from alcohol, which he recently maintained he had stuck with all this time (hence the strawberry milk cameo). So, while I agree that church attendance doesn't preclude freakiness (hey, I'm fairly religious IRL, but Judaism actually encourages...um...enjoying the marriage bed, thank you very much), he is so damn sweet when he's not dancing that I couldn't have him go all Eiffel Tower on us. Sigh. Now I feel like writing some OnJongKey... stay tuned.

[beyateriz]

^/)^ heeeeeee.

[jinkibumiminho]

Umm....haaaa?
I'm hoping that your cutey Kyu icon means you are a happy camper?

[beyateriz]

Very very happy. You don't even know how much. *_*

[jinkibumiminho]

mmmm....close-up smaller-left-eyed-smiley jinki...nom nom nom!!!