Forgive Me: Onew/Key; NC-17, part 1

[jinkibumiminho]

Title: Forgive Me
Author: mimi_oly
Rating: NC-17 (for theme, explicit sexual content)
Pairing/Focus: Onew/Key
Word count: 8200
Genre: Drama, smut
Summary: Jinki comes home drunk and takes what he wants from Kibum. There are repercussions for this violation.
Squick/trigger warnings: Issues of consent and control relating to sex (not a torrid BDSM fic, but I

Comments

[a_life_defiant]

oh my O_O

particular crustiness of uncertain origin

loled particularly hard here....

When Jonghyun came home drunk that time you told him he was an idiot and made him sleep on the bathroom floor so he wouldn’t puke all over everything.”

The proverbial light bulb went on over Jinki’s head and he finally looked at Kibum, who wore a bemused, enigmatic expression.

“Jonghyun had to sleep on the floor,” Jinki mumbled, “but for me, you made yachaejuk.”

AND here XD

aww!!! Lee Jinki.....ofc Kibum has the hots for you. you're a sexy beast, mmkay? XD going off to part two now :D

♥

[sunday_lee]

OnKey are so precious
I like the way drunk Jinki thought Kibum purposely throwing himself at him while sober Jinki is too dense to realize Kibum pratically keep on throwing himself at him ^^
love this story
thank you for your writing

[jinkibumiminho]

You really caught on to what I was hoping would come through: sober Jinki doesn't even consider that Kibum could be interested, and assumed that he must have taken advantage. He is just too modest to realize that he's wrong!

I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for your nice comment!

[cosmoqueen2900]

Awww Jinki actually thought he forced himself on Key!! That poor thing! :(

I love how Key is toying with him though. It's so damn sweet though! Onew saying he's his slave, omg you can already tell how in love these two are!!! ;_____; *prances off to read part two*

[fleckled]

Okay, it took me an extra day to get to this (:c) because my spring semester started up today so I was busy but I am so glad I decided to read this before bed! First off, wow. I am kind of dreading part two already because I started writing down my thoughts partway through this so I didn't forget things and it kind of spiralled into a mess. I'm sorry in advance. Moving right along

[jinkibumiminho]

[glomps onto you with kitten paws]

Thank you for such thoughtful comments. I'm so glad you like the characterization. This really plays like a movie on my head, and I felt like I was just channeling them when I wrote it out.

One of my favorite images of a first kiss is that barely there meeting of lips, enjoying the baby steps before everything gets deliciously sloppy. I'm glad that part worked for you, too!