Forgive Me: Onew/Key; NC-17, part 2

[jinkibumiminho]

Title: Forgive Me
Author: mimi_oly
Rating: NC-17 (for theme, explicit sexual content)
Pairing/Focus: Onew/Key
Squick/trigger warnings: Issues of consent and control relating to sex.

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[jinkibumiminho]

What is a smexy Onew fic without at least a passing reference to Dubulge, after all?

Genius? Nah...just writing what Key sends my way.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

[linnhe]

Jinki let his gaze move upward from the silly socks to a fuzzy, shapely pair of legs, an oversized T-shirt, an exposed collar bone (and a smooth, creamy shoulder), and finally, Kibum’s placid face. The younger man’s expression was inscrutable.
you had me at fuzzy, but it just got better from there on

When Jonghyun came home drunk that time you told him he was an idiot and made him sleep on the bathroom floor so he wouldn’t puke all over everything.
I had a little too much fun picturing Jonghyun rolling around on the bathroom floor, moaning about being cold and drunk and calling Kibum a little bitch for making him sleep there, and then dozing off halfway through :D

“I like this. ‘Enchanting,’ huh? Go on,” Kibum smiled coyly, resting his head in his hand with his elbow on the table.
so cute!

“Kibum?” Jinki breathed into Kibum’s neck.
“Hmmm?”
“Do you want me to take you to bed?”
tummy flip ;_;

which mostly consisted of drunken, but sweet kisses stolen by a certain noona sunbae at company parties
I totally didn't picture Jung Juri

[jinkibumiminho]

And you gave me yet another gif!
I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for helping with the inspiration and the suffering through the teasers!
Muchas gracias!
[as for the noona I was actually picturing someone like Dana or Sunday from The Grace, but Juri is certainly a likely culprit]

[shayvanwinkle]

1. that dish sounds delicious

2. onew saying 'Jagiya' sounds delicious ^^

3. i liked the way you handled the squick warnings. infinitely more smooth than me, thumbs up :D

[jinkibumiminho]

re: #3, it was a tough call. I didn't want to give too much away or be misleading, so I'm glad it worked for you.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

[imvus]

brain is dead and tired and I will be back tomorrow with a proper comment. :3

[fantomistress]

Now THAT is what I call a thorough smut. I was invested the entire time and I even had a nice little chortle at their virginity discussion. --I crave yachaejuk. Thank you, Unnie! I'm a happy camper now!

[jinkibumiminho]

I'm glad you enjoyed it after all the trolling. You can see why it took me so long. I wanted to cover alllll the bases! And then there was all the distraction of trying to find just the right pic of Kibum's undies. Research, research. Heh heh heh.