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jinkibumiminho

I Feel Like I Win When I Lose

Feb 24, 2011 21:32

Title: I Feel Like I Win When I Lose
Author: mimi_oly
Rating: NC-17 (language, sex)
Pairing/Focus: Minho/Onew
Genre: Humor, Friendship, Smut
Words: 3200
Summary: Minho and Onew play a new variation of their dangerous game after their latest fan event.

( Minho was undeniably the tallest, most athletic, and most competitive of the group, but when it came to brute strength, no one could match Onew. That’s what made it so exciting as they struggled for dominance. )

pairing: minho/onew, author: mimi_oly, !fanfic, rating: nc-17

Comments 82

jinkibumiminho February 25 2011, 05:33:50 UTC

spot for ontaejongminkey

YOU! ontaejongminkey February 25 2011, 05:48:23 UTC

WAAAA! I haven't read it yet cos im still squealing and flailing XD /bricked. Lol, ilu bb and i'll proclaim all my other love for you laturrr <3 *runs off to read*

Re: YOU! ontaejongminkey February 25 2011, 06:34:27 UTC

Damn! Holy shit! O.o That was HOT HOT HOT SIZZLING HOT! XD I loved the idea that Minho and Onew are always engaging in 'weird wrestling matches' that ends when one of them screams 'oppa' instead of 'hyung' and the loser, literally, should go suck it off! Kekeke XD Very clever! Another point is the incorporation of the (super adorable) TofuHo back-hug at the recent Santafe event! It made this story much much much more realistic 8D The little details you mixed in are excellent! I especially loved the 'Taemin the maknae has more pubic hair than Jinki the leader' part! It made me giggle. Another strong point is the idea of Minho and Onew not noticing/knowing that they wanted/liked/needed each other, only realizing it at their kiss. *dreamy sigh* The smut scene was absolutely PERFECT! Minho and Taemin watching porn, Minho actually keeping a bottle of lube and condoms, Jinki scared = genius! I melted when Minho called Jinki 'baby' and 'sweet baby' I AAAWWW-ed so much! Lol. Jinki is a baby that is hung like a porn star. Oh the irony! ( ... )

Re: YOU! jinkibumiminho February 25 2011, 06:54:00 UTC

I'm so glad you liked it!
I have no idea where this came from, other than the idea that Minho always get points for being Mr. Athletic, but Onew seems to me like the stronger one, not to mention Dubulge. Then all the cute back hug pictures...
I've never shipped TofuHo before, or pictured Dubu bottoming, but it was fun to write (especially imagining Jinki coming undone...sweet heavens...)

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a_life_defiant February 25 2011, 05:51:34 UTC

but this time, the rivals seemed especially vicious. Mothers were insulted. Singing voices were disparaged. Sexual orientation was questioned. Sports teams were denigrated. Poultry was mocked.

This alone was so epic that I legit had a seizure. Then all the sexaahy....*throws ice down my shirt*

This just gave me LIFE! XD

jinkibumiminho February 25 2011, 05:53:49 UTC

Oh, sweetie, coming from YOU...

You complete me!!!

a_life_defiant February 25 2011, 06:00:40 UTC

ME? Lol

And YOU complete me!!! *squishes*

gooberso1 February 25 2011, 06:38:21 UTC

This might be one of the best tofuho fic I've ever read!
Normally I don't like this pairing but this... It was... WOW!
I'll leave you a better comment when I stop spazzing.
:o

jinkibumiminho February 25 2011, 06:57:44 UTC

Lurrrve your icon! I don't normally ship them either! Or picture Jinki bottoming, but once I started writing him coming undone...unf.

olebade February 25 2011, 06:38:53 UTC

....i have "Shout Out" on repeat right now thanks to you XD

and that last bit with taemin was cute XD

jinkibumiminho February 25 2011, 06:59:54 UTC

Listening to "Shout Out" takes me to my happy place. "Get It" works, too.
Thanks for reading & commenting!

annyeonghase_yo February 25 2011, 06:58:36 UTC

can i just say... thanks to you, my shitty week is no longer shitty :)

well... time for me to go take a cold shower now.... and maybe throw some ice down my pants or something....

jinkibumiminho February 25 2011, 07:03:32 UTC

It's nice to see you here!
So glad I could brighten your day.