Comments | jinkitama: DRABBLE: THE SCRIPT PROMPT

jinkitama

DRABBLE: THE SCRIPT PROMPT

Apr 28, 2014 22:47

If you’re standing with your suitcase/ But you can’t step on the train…
He’s not okay. Kibum knows that now. It’s raining, soaking through his clothes and drenching him to the bones. He shivers and he can’t seem to stop. He’s not okay. He doesn’t know how long he has been standing here, rooted to the spot because he can’t take one step forward. It ( Read more... )

!fanfic, drabble, onkey

Comments 4

max2min April 29 2014, 16:06:36 UTC

so beautiful ;_; ♥

thepavementgirl April 29 2014, 17:54:52 UTC

WAAAAAAAH! I love how you wrote it dear. Curt but simple and angst-y but detailed-ly perfect. I'm sorry I suck at giving comments but I can't help leaving one in this. It's too beautiful to be forgotten so great job dear. I though it would be angst-y in the end but thank you for that fluff-y ending. By the way, I love figurative speech and intricate poetry and you've just did that in this. Thank you for sharing this awesome fic! :)

kpopgeisha April 29 2014, 18:38:47 UTC

OnKey is my secret ship, but this is painful and beautiful at the same time!

diamondacequeen April 30 2014, 07:13:57 UTC

I think that the build up for this was great. I was hoping that Kibum would just not get on the train or Jinki would come and stop him. I'm glad that they were able to stop Kibum from leaving forever. Now they have another chance to make it work. I really like this because it makes me wonder what got them to this point, and I want to know how they'll carry on from here.