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[jinny_chan]

Title: One step closer
Chapter: Oneshot
Author: jinny_chan
Genre: angst, drama, death
Warnings: None? xDD''
Rating: PG?
Pairings: UruhaxKai
Summary: "But I’m alone here. However.. I’m totally alone anyway. I’ve got no one. I even lost you, although I could have avoided that."
Disclaimer: Uruha and Kai totally belong to me. At the moment they're in my bed and

Comments

[nashi_kanata]

T^T

NOOOOO......... *breaks down and cry*

that.... was so mean! xD;; you did warn me about that but.... T^T gosh! I never thought it would be like that! *_* dammmnnnn

:3 anyway, not bad.... not bad at all (grammar wise and word manipulation wise)~~ especially since it's your first time writing in English~! ._. I wouldn't really know the difficulty in that because my first fic was already in English. I saw a few grammatical errors but that's not my main point in this comment! LOL

Then one of the worst things that could happen happened to me. I feel in love with you..

I should be fell instead of feel. xD

~_~ I can't remember where the others are. :3 but yeah

T^T.... I still can't get over it! XDDD

Good job dear! T^T I feel so happy that I'm reading another Uruha x Kai fanfic! *_* and.... I'm not the author!!! *fangirls on you*

[jinny_chan]

Don't cry ;___;
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Yep.. I did warn you.. so.. XD

Eh.. well xD
I don't know.. I'm just not too good in expressing myself in english.. I was better a while ago.. But by now I rarely talkt/write in english.. Guess that's my problem > <

Eh.. Oh.. Spelling mistake XDD
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Thank you <3

*_*
A Fingirl *Q*