Lies [part three]

Dec 07, 2009 18:47



A/N: Wow. This chapter was really hard to write. And I actually had half of it done already. As a bit of a guide to the reader, not everything that is said here can be taken at face value.

Thanks to everyone who commented the last time. And a big thanks to jorge_callas. Happy reading. I look forward to your thoughts. 3507 words
“There’s nothing in the universe that I want to be.” )

yoochun, lies, yunho, fanfic, multi-part

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jinsung December 8 2009, 02:22:18 UTC
thanks for reading. i will try to be more regular, and i had exams.

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naeve14 December 8 2009, 04:35:06 UTC
I am really really glad that you finally updated *hugs* More of relief that it is certain that you won't abandon this fic halfway like most writers did *beams* Thank you so much for that ( ... )

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jinsung December 8 2009, 09:16:31 UTC
I'm really moved by what you said here. This part was difficult to write and I'm very happy that you are so attentive. I hope you enjoyed looking for the clues.

Since it's really quite hard to express my appreciation with words, I'll give you something else, and will be pleased if you accept it. I hope it shows up and doesn't take too much time to appear.


... )

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jinsung December 8 2009, 09:21:36 UTC
About Yoochun, I would say that the mystery has a little something to do with memories and its also related to the neuroses that people have, questions, doubts. I'm trying to figure out as I write.

Thanks for your tolerance! My exams are finished... have been for a week but I was spending more time writing up the later half of the chapter.

I'll complete the fic.

"I enjoyed this kind of game, trying to read the writer's mind and see if our brains connected somewhere in the middle."

*hearts*!

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nori_sumire December 16 2009, 20:48:17 UTC
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This is arguably the best fanfiction I've ever happened to read.
Actually, I feel more comfortable defining it a short story than a fanfiction, cause the plot alone is superb, and your characters are so well defined and peculiarly delineated that I have the impression this story detaches itself from fanfiction.
So, what I really was intending to say is that you're pure awsome and I may worship you till the end of my days.
Keep writing and you'll be rewarded with my utterly unconditional and infinite gratitude, wich is really not that great of a reward, but nowdays,you know... better than anything.
LOVELOVELOVE to the greatness that you are and I beg your pardon for having butchered English but my first (and only) language is Italian, and I'm not that fluent in it either...

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jinsung December 17 2009, 15:48:54 UTC
thank you for reading and commenting! i don't mind your English at all--i totally CAN'T speak Italian.

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ekkusuchan January 5 2010, 12:23:34 UTC
it's barely there, so delicate that it's frustrating, but i like this. there'll be a part 4 right? =D

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jinsung January 5 2010, 14:52:18 UTC
Thanks for reading. I'm intrigued by what you said...

There is a part four.

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jhyjfan February 27 2010, 03:16:47 UTC
i hope you'll keep updating this story.
~can u add me 2 ur fl?!

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