Opinions?

[jiraiya]

Lets do some time traveling to my messy HQ in the past where I created Come Come Paradise. You all are invited to critique my prologue. Tell me what you think about it in terms of content and blatant pervertness. Mind you all, I hid some of the second meanings so that only the true perverts can see the read picture :P. There is more to this but I

Comments

[orochimaru]

Jiraiya, kindly leave snakes out of your stupid books.

Hmm?

[jiraiya]

You threatening me? I'll make sure to mention it a lot from now on. =)

Re: Hmm?

[orochimaru]

Do that. I won't mind making you carry out my wishes.

[temari]

*shudders*
You make me sick.

You're such a hentai...
How does Tsunade sama deal with you?

*shudders*
Now I know why Orochimaru is evil...

[yami_no_ryu]

Jiraiya - Sex God. XD

Just where do you get your inspiration. ^^"