Comments | jirettai: [Ficlet] Sailormoon: Sometimes

jirettai

[Ficlet] Sailormoon: Sometimes

Apr 07, 2009 09:24

Title: Sometimes
Fandom: Sailormoon / Manga Silver Millennium
Characters/Pairing: Zoisite
Rating: G
Summary: Prince Zoisaito meets an important someone for the first time.
Notes: This is also my first attempt at writing a child, so any and all constructive criticism is appreciated!

( let me tell you a secret about a father's love, a secret that my daddy said was just between us. you see daddies don't just love their children every now and then, it's a love without end, amen. )

fic: sailormoon

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pocketsprite April 9 2009, 14:58:00 UTC

Thank you; I'm glad you enjoyed it! ♥

venusorbit1 April 20 2009, 03:55:57 UTC

Well AW. Is there going to be more to this story? It's very cute in an AWWW way.

But dead mum always makes me :(

pocketsprite April 24 2009, 01:05:14 UTC

Sorry this reply is so late!

(^_^;) Well, I'll probably do more background for Zoisaito in this universe, but no more of this particular story. I'm glad you enjoyed it, though!

(Dead mum makes me :( too, but at least this time Zoisaito stayed alive! I should probably come up with a better defense than that.)

charliechaplin2 April 22 2009, 19:46:28 UTC

I really liked this! He;s a cute kid and who the man was completely threw me! Are you going to continue this? It's always nice to see the Shitennou before they've become Shitennou. I thought the last paragraph was particularly my favourite, how you kind of sum everything up, present and future in a few lines. Really nice!

pocketsprite April 24 2009, 00:48:40 UTC

Thank you! (^_^;) I'm horribly biased towards Zoisaito, so I tend to see his more manipulative/vengeful side as, uh, kind of cute and amusing. Of course, conning sweeties from the cook isn't exactly on par with killing his colleague, but give him time! I'm probably not going to continue this little ficlet exactly, but I am working on a rather humongous Silver Millennium piece from Earth's perspective. ... Which is probably not at all what you meant! *laughs*

I thought the last paragraph was particularly my favourite, how you kind of sum everything up, present and future in a few lines. Really nice!
Thank you very much! I wasn't sure if that read well or not, so I'm glad you liked it.