Why Reborn Stayed

[jiriayawhitney]

Title: Why Tsuna Never Fired Reborn, Besides the Obvious (or, simply: Why Reborn Stayed)
Rating: NC-17?
Author: JiraiyaWhitney
Characters/Pairing/s: Tsunayoshi Sawada, Gokudera Hayato, 5927,
Warning/s: Crack, suicidal thoughts, boys humping, Tsuna's OOC-ness, TYL!, FartherFigure!Reborn
Disclaimer: No, KHR is not mine for if it was it would have become

Comments

[reidluver]

Oooo! Holy crap this is my favorite! You did an amazing job here! I really like how you showed that Reborn was the one to save Tsuna from himself, and now that you've mentioned it I can easily see Tsuna being ready to commit suicide, and the fact that if Reborn wasn't there....wow. That is really rather scary. That's amazing.

And then when you had Gokudera admit he tried the same thing...wow there was so much emotion here. This is a really great job, seriously. And welcome! XD Glad you found the comm. *hugs*

*squee*

[jiriayawhitney]

*hugsbak* as;kdgaejfgni, people read this? Ah... *warm heart and face-breaking smile* And favourite? :D None of those adjetives were the first to come to mind, I'll admit, but... ok. :D But, you have to admit, it's kind of logical. The mind, convinced, the body, to follow, y'know? It's an idea that I've been toying with for a while. And the part about Gokudera trying it too is an idea I've been contemplating for a while that I've actually tried in an 8059 story that's going no where so I'm making it a 5927 story (hey, I tried). Although it's unloved, 5927 is the easiest for me to write, read, believe and, well, yeah....
*dissolves into a puddle of goo*
:D :D :D :D :D :D :D

Re: *squee*

[reidluver]

Heh, can I say I'm proud to have reduced you to a puddle of goo? XD This story deserved it, so I gave the right comment. :) 5927 is the most believable and cutest!! ♥

[rune_world]

I'm seriously trying to write a 5927 fic in my language but failing! How did you do that without trouble???

[jiriayawhitney]

Without trouble? Ah.....
*looks at timestamp on the worddoc*
Um... I dunno? It didn't take me long to write and with me and my OCD-ness, I beta'd it myself, which really doesn't count, but I guess that I just get an idea from one or two words or a feeling of another fic and scribble them down.... Been sitting on this idea for a while.... Sorry I couldn't be of more help.

[e_eleniel]

I have read both of the stories you've posted today and man, I really loved them, especially this one. the notion of Tsuna contemplating suicide was depicted so realistically that it was really heart-breaking, yet seeing how Reborn helped him to find things to hold onto and love was was frigging precious on so many levels.

You write wonderfully, I hope you'll continue writing more 5927, because then the world will be a better place for me XD

[jiriayawhitney]

Write more 5927? HOLY- YOU MEAN THERE'S OTHER PAIRINGS FOR THIS FANDOM? NOWAI!
... other than D18, not interested....
But I can't write that, so I'm sticking with 5927. I've got a story I've been working on for a while now that's, like, twelve chapters of soon-to-be-explained Tsuna-OOCness that's still in the process of being written, so... hopefully, that'll be out soon! Both here, and FF (ooh, I have to post these on FF)
ARIGATO for the review. I love reviews. They make the world go round...
And give Gokudera the money for the materials needed to make his dynamite, so, yeah! Awesomeness!

[classicgirl1325]

Waaaah I totally agree that I never would have thought about Tsuna debating suicide, but your story was so believable. And Gokudera was simply precious. Great job!

[jiriayawhitney]

Thank you so much. In the little time I had before the WIFI went off (my roommate has the router to go off at night so she'll actually sleep and not stay up all the time), I worked really hard. And I loved the Gokudera I have here. It's hard to get him IC, and though it's not completely IC, I think it's close enough to pass.

[classicgirl1325]

Hahaha yes I'd say it passes! I really thought it was a wonderful story, and the scene under the stars had that nice kind of understated sexiness to it (if that makes any sense haha)

[jiriayawhitney]

Haha, that's good, cus that's kinda what I wanted. At first, it was them in bed after a long day's work but that wasn't quite what I was going for. I wanted it to be an equal mix of fluff and angst and only the stars narrowed it out. And it's funny to think of the girl who gave him the idea's star staring at them as they do that. And thank you! :D that makes me feel better.

ACK! That's where I know you're user name from! I've been going through ilaem's 5927 list since last night! And I'm not even half way done! I love that list! I have it favourited to my computer! Thank you so much for posting it, I absolutely adore those fics!

[gokulex59]

I really loved this one ^^

And I started to having a thought like we have the same Tsuna portrait in our minds. Less innocent than he looks in the original series :D

This time it's so much more emotional, that's why I loved it ^^ Keep writing despite all of bad critisms like I've done to your other work that you shared with this one ^^

[jiriayawhitney]

Bad criticisms??? WHERE?!?!?! Lol. Yeah, I like this one better, despite the typos all over and that I wrote it I ten minutes (if that). It's much more well-appreciated from myself, as well. :3 (What are we, on the same wavelengths or something? Lol, dirty!Tsuna is so fun, though, no one expects it, no one at all, bwahahahahahahaha- *cough cough* ahem. :D.)

[gokulex59]

Hahahahaha xD But really, isn't Jyuudaime more... "entertaining" in my- sorry, our minds :D