Casanova Chapter 7 part 2

[jirurukyungmi]

Meet my Fiance

[Junsu POV]

I woke up seeing that it was getting dark.

"I fell asleep.." I heard some snoring and put on the light seeing Yoochun sleeping next to me.

Cute..

"Y-Yoochun.. wake up sleepy head" I gave him a little push and he didn't wake up "Chunnie..." stil no sign.

I pushed him harder and he waked up alarmed "NO!"
"W-What no?" he looked at

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SPOT!

[kami_no_kami]

JiJi honey! I got spot, yay!
[i think i got spot...]

I've read everything and I must say, it's quite interesting~<3

I dunno if you want any criticism but, I will talk to you about it if you want me to...<3

Ah! May I be your beta? You know what a 'beta' is, right? :3

Re: SPOT!

[jirurukyungmi]

Yeah you got it xD

Criticism is okay o:
Better from you then somebody else xD
Beta? like msn or something? o____o

Re: SPOT!

[kami_no_kami]

Beta is a livejournal term (i think...)

which means a person who'll help you with grammar and spelling errors. A "proof-reader" or "editor" ^___^

I'd love to be your beta. Since you're not english and I'm excelling in english (somewhat), i can help you! :D All you have to do is send me your chapter/fiction and I'll run through it. Then I will correct any mistakes in spelling or grammar and send it back to you...if the story plot remains after my editing, you can post it to your livejournal~

[you will notice that in some stories, the author's say they do not have a beta...it means they don't have a proof-reader for them so many spelling/grammar mistakes are made]

<3<3<3

Most of the problems in your story is the grammar and spelling--which I totally understand. Also, it's good that you add the [Point of View] warning before writing...so people won't get confused.

Another thing, when the font changes, remember to keep it constant at a certain area of the person's speech. I notice that the text goes italic for 'thought' but then

Re: SPOT!

[jirurukyungmi]

No yes please! PRETTY PLEASE! I would really really like that
about the Italic things its stupid because I have it in the good way on my computer but when I put it on LJ it turns into Italic and I can´t change it! >.<
But how would I sent it to you then? With your email or something? :o
I really would apreciate your help!
I love you too!! *3* <3333

*huggles back to you!*

[eiira]

YAY!! I got the chance to read casanova!! I'm so liking it!! yay!! sorry I coulnt read earlier!! But I am now!! better late than never!! ok so I read everything! and wow Yunho as casanova! I can tottally imagine it!! hehehe I mean he has the looks!! I love how you describethem!! I can totally visualize this story when I'm reading it!! I can feel what they are going throug! aww poor Yoosu ! I want them to be happy!! I'm sorry for babbling too much (again)!! I hope you have a nice break from school! and I hope that means more casanova!! lol!! cant wait for next chapter! take care!!

[eiira]

by the way sorry for my spelling! english is not my first language! Im sorry if you dont understand me sometime..
*hugs*

[jirurukyungmi]

My english isnt that good 2 xD I'm not from england I'm a cheese girl [From holland] So :P

[eiira]

ohh!! I'm from Puerto Rico, my native lnguage is spanish! not many people that speak spanish here on lj! hehe