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jj_280391

What You'd Be Today - 2/?

Sep 23, 2011 18:04

It ain't fair: you died too young,
like the story that had just begun,
but death tore the pages all away.

Summary: Arizona thought she knew the truth about everything that had ever happened in her life, but sometimes “the truth” can come back to haunt you.

Rating: PG-13

Disclaimer: I do not own Grey’s Anatomy or any of its characters.

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callie/arizona, -fanfic

Comments 9

majincammy September 23 2011, 17:07:51 UTC

Well, I'm really enjoying this story, JJ. Lots of good things happening here. Nix finally getting out what he's been holding back is awesome. Arizona totally freaking out and the glimpse into her past is just great. And now Callie calling her and catching her in a lie, oh boy. lol Just awesome job. :D

jj_280391 September 23 2011, 17:26:59 UTC

yay im really glad you like it! im really really enjoying writing this story and I love writing about Arizona's past because we hardly ever see it on the show!

I think Nix really needed to get his pent up feelings out and now he finally has.

Arizona's got some explaining to do now haha. keep your eyes peeled for chapter 3 and oh btw ur awesome!

nerdfightergirl September 23 2011, 17:41:02 UTC

Drama. Drama. Drama.

I like this story. It's an interesting concept.

jj_280391 September 23 2011, 17:44:05 UTC

thank you. Glad to know you are enjoying it and thanks for commenting :D

pens_co927 September 23 2011, 19:33:42 UTC

dun dun dun dunnnnnnnnn. I love love love LOVE this story. The similarities are between Jacob and Timothy are uncanny and I'm kinda hating Nix for blowing them off. But I can see where he's just protecting himself after being cut out of Arizona's life for so long. Callie catching Arizona in her lie...AWESOME. I'd kinda like to know more about her therapist comment in the flashback. GREAT JOB! Can't wait for the next chap!

majincammy September 23 2011, 19:52:08 UTC

Ties into the storyline of As Time Goes By, since JJ is using a lot of the same characters and the past timeline. Arizona's therapist suggested she cut ties with everyone and that was the moment she followed through with it.

JJ can correct me here, if I'm wrong. :x

jj_280391 September 24 2011, 02:21:43 UTC

Wow what a wonderful comment! Yes Jacob and Tim are so similar its frustrating for everyone lol and trust me Nix has his reasons for being so angry that you will see more of in other flashbacks. I loved that Callie caught her :D as Majin said Arizona chose that moment in the flashback to cut people out and we will meet this therapist...maybe.

Glad you enjoyed the chapter :)

funkyshaz57 September 23 2011, 23:23:04 UTC

Wow if that was just a filler then I'm pretty freaking excited for the next one, Drama alright lol. I actually thought that nix would believe her I mean it's a pretty big assumption but I didn't think he would react the way he did but I guess it brought up past hurts for him so it was actually pretty realistic ( ... )

funkyshaz57 September 23 2011, 23:23:59 UTC

Oh and I forgot to add that the flashback was so well done it was heartbreaking and my Arizona heart wanted to cry but excellently written!