What You'd Be Today - 3A/?

Oct 06, 2011 03:59


It ain't fair: you died too young,
like the story that had just begun,
but death tore the pages all away.

Summary: Arizona thought she knew the truth about everything that had ever happened in her life, but sometimes “the truth” can come back to haunt you.

Rating: PG-13

Disclaimer: I do not own Grey’s Anatomy or any of its characters.

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majincammy October 6 2011, 03:20:40 UTC
Sorry I couldn't get Semagic to work and just post the whole thing. >< I'll put my real comment at the end of the chapter.

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jj_280391 October 6 2011, 03:33:46 UTC
haha don't worry it's not you're fault :) okey dokey. Thanks again for all your help you really are fantastic!

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funkyshaz57 October 6 2011, 07:46:00 UTC
Ouch!!!

First off I was going to say naughty Arizona for lying then sneaking off for a drink but now my heart is kinda breaking for her!! I think Nix was going a little overboard I mean he himself was acting like a crazy person. I understand him and Callie don't believe her hell I don't think I would but I wouldn't scoff and turn my back on her I wouldn't even entertain the idea of committing her.

I felt my heart break when Arizona looked at Callie full of love and hope and Callie couldn't give her the answer she wanted...annoying thing is that I have no idea whether she's right or wrong. Even if she is wrong though it doesn't mean she's crazy this guy really could be a replica of her brother and maybe he's just someone who is supposed to be in Arizona's life at this point in her life and she feels connected to him, that's not crazy as it does happen, people come into our lives for all sorts of reasons

Anyway excuse my rant LOL! I really did enjoy it despite the angsty tone it was and I'm off to read the second part now!

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jj_280391 October 6 2011, 15:49:30 UTC
Wow. Yes It is very angsty. I think all 3 adults have there points but the whole having someone to talk to is not so much about having her committed just more about having her talk to someone. To be honest this is exactly what I wanted with people feeling for all of them because like i said they all have their reasons.

That was the hardest part for me to write because it felt in a little way like i was breaking them up even though i knew I wasn't. It's not so much the person coming into Arizona's life that is making her seem crazy its her actions and her behavior i think because Arizona is usually so level headed and knows exactly what she's doing that it is as scary for Callie and Nix as it is for Arizona.

Now excuse my rant LOL! glad you enjoyed it and hope you enjoy part 2!

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