Do You Have Eleven Electrons? Because You're Sodium Fine!; Kai/Luhan

[jjaestar17]

Title: Do You Have Eleven Electrons? Because You're Sodium Fine!
Pairings: Kai/Luhan, minor!Sehun/Tao
Summary: Jongin has a crush on hot teacher's assistant Luhan. (In which Jongin is lost in the land of deer but Man U still sucks.)

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Comments

[taehae]

The secondhand embarrassment I got from reading awkward and embarrassing Jongin asdfghjkl DEAD cries a little at the pickup lines they conjured LOL

Sehun is the perfect besfrannnnn!!!!

[jjaestar17]

the secondhand embarrassment is strong in this one- i had to pause at some scenes and just judge the words staring back at me on the screen lol.(i have a super soft spot for awkward jongin though <3)

oh but yes- sehun is the best bro ever. he needs an award or something xD

thank you for reading and commenting ;3

[taehae]

same! i love awkward jongin too ;w;
and your stories are perfect and your characterizations are a++++++ ♥3♥

[red_planet31]

This is the best thing ever. THE BEST THING EVER.
Jongin is just so adorkable how does anybody not love him. SeTaoKai best friends forever-ness is EPIC. And YES MAN U LUHAN. SHUT UP JONGIN. XD
TaoHun are so awesome. And OMGLOL Jongin preferring Tao over Sehun. Screw Sehun.

Can't wait to read more of your work! :)

[jjaestar17]

THREE CHEERS FOR ADORKABLE JONGIN~~ (i prefer man u too so jongin can just shut his face lol)

THE BEST THING EVER BABE YOU'RE MAKING ME BLUSH >///< hehe this comment made me smile~

yes. screw sehun. lol.

thanks so much for reading and commenting!

[smallorbits]

YOU SOLD ME AT (that fucker)

Sehun trips him and Jongin doesn’t even notice until he’s on the ground.
SCREAMS

THIS FIC IS PERFECT. LUKAI IS PERFECT. YOU'RE PERFECT. I LOVE YOU SO MUCH AUTHORNIM AUTHORNIM AUTHORNIM????
your sense of humour is AMAZING and everything was cheesy but not overly so. i am just flailing and thrashing because all these FEELS AND APPRECIATION that i cannot express and oh oh oh DID I MENTION THAT I LOVE THIS?

[jjaestar17]

OHOHOHOHO THAT'S ONE OF MY FAVORITE LINES XD

PERFECT? THIS COMMENT IS PERFECT- BABE YOU'RE SO PRECIOUS ;A; stop it, you're making me smile too much!! (i love the cheese though. everyone, lets pile on the kailu cheese ;3)

THANK YOU FOR LOVING THIS. for reading, for commenting, AND BEING PRECIOUS~~ ♥

[shimchangmint]

Hi omg this was so adorable
I think I flailed a million times
It's rare to find this kind of a characterized Jongin especially since he's mostly portrayed as some cold and nonchalant hot shot
So this was such a refreshing read! The sekai bickering is hilarious
And when I saw that this would be a TA!AU I screamed bc TA luhan and student Kai is just ijfrnfrjfcj
Loved this!

[jjaestar17]

forgive my late butt for replying so late omg ;A; (heechul speaks for me bby ><)

but thank you so much for flailing over this fic! i love flailing over fics! and lol to be honest i dont like writing cold hotshot jongin ^^;; (especially when i could have awkward and embarrassing jongin~ no contest hehe ^^)

woot for TA!AU.

thank you for leaving this comment and for loving this fic!!

[iamcrazie]

omg this was the cutest fic ever! it's filled with cuteness, awkwardness, snarkiness and everything! I love Sehuns sarcastic humor and Jongin's adorably cute personality! This made me squeal and laugh so many times. (Haha you should really tag this as comedy as well) This was so flufffyy! Thanks so much for writing this ^^

[jjaestar17]

wow wow wow it has been almost a month im sorry i saw this comment i loved it i just suck at replying ;~~~~;

thank you so much for calling it cute (sehun is a shit best friend he's the best lol) i take so much pride in making you laugh (like you don't even know lol).

THANK YOU FOR THE BEAUTIFUL COMMENT AND BEING CUTE.