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chiddle in jjajan

(008) Time Machine

Jun 14, 2010 01:22

Time Machine
taemin x you: your love story with taemin
PG / Romance, Drama / 3,132w
un-beta'd

( You lay on the bed, the smell of wood drifting in the air and hitting your nostrils. Smelt like home. )

(fandom:shinee), !author:chiddle, (character:taemin), %oneshot

Comments 20

magickismight June 13 2010, 17:40:28 UTC

Oh my gosh ;~;
I'm glad it went backwards in time, because for one, fics don't usually do that, and two, I would have been worried about the old couple dying and such.
I jsut loved it all to pieces. I like fics like this, let's you imagine you're the girl :')♥

chiddle June 14 2010, 04:27:05 UTC

:'DD thankyou so much! yeah, i like __xyou fics too! ^^ ♥

miss_circle June 13 2010, 18:02:43 UTC

Why didn't you like it? :(
This is really good. I like the way your plot is going back in time. My favorite part is the one Taemin making out with another woman. That short part was just intense.
Write more! :D

chiddle June 14 2010, 04:28:04 UTC

:( Idk, to me, it was trashy /__\
:'D thanks fore reading! ♥

kimchislurpie03 June 13 2010, 18:36:25 UTC

SPOT~ hold on, i'll be back, LOL
i juss love how it's a taemin and YOU oneshot. x)

chiddle June 14 2010, 04:28:27 UTC

enjoy, babe! :')

chungmah June 13 2010, 19:16:58 UTC

Wow. So well written. Sweet, bitter, hard to read at times 'cause I felt bad for her. I mean, me. Ahaha.

chiddle June 14 2010, 04:29:03 UTC

HAHAH, i'm sorry if you were hurt ;w; ♥

chungmah June 14 2010, 16:36:42 UTC

LOL it's okay. It meant that you did a great job. I was so inspired to write after reading 8D

chiddle June 14 2010, 16:48:27 UTC

;DDDD heheheh thats glad to hear, thanks for reading, love!

i failed epicly on my last comment paralynx June 13 2010, 20:33:59 UTC

so beautiful, omg. ♥

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