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May 03, 2006 17:04

take a step..be carful to fall to fall..too low to trip..to close for any pain..take a step..one foot in the distance..always follows behind..take another full step..i walk with uncertainty..we walk with doubt..i walk with shame..take another closer step..close enuff to see me..not close enuff to feel..not close enuff to touch..but just enuff space ( Read more... )

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wmisswscarewall May 4 2006, 03:43:22 UTC
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i always say if you can't end something powerfully, you can't expect anything. your writings remain consistently interesting, and the ending is as it should be---powerful.

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space_princess May 9 2006, 02:26:18 UTC
You and I had an awkward first conversation once. I hate how people always are when you first meet them. I have always wanted to throw a party and invite a bunch of people that don't know each other and set a rule that nobody is allowed to talk about where they work, how long they've lived in town, where they're originally from or any of the standard introductory bullshit. I think it might work, especially if everyone were really drunk.

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