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jjluf

Artificial Love? (5/?)

Jul 08, 2011 01:30

Title: Artificial Love? (5/?)
Pairing: Jaemin, past Homin, ninja!yoosu
Genre: Romance, science fiction
Length: chaptered
Rating: R for this chapter
Warning: Language, failed attempt at smut
Summary: Yoochun convinces changmin it's time to move on and find himself a new love. But his way of helping Changmin find love again is deciding Changmin needs to ( Read more... )

rating pg:13, author: j, length: chaptered genre: romance, dbsk, pairings: jaemin

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jjluf July 14 2011, 04:17:58 UTC

Thanks for reading~!

rikuma July 8 2011, 07:25:21 UTC

I'm so happy that jae finally get to serve his purpose...:)
love the entries....all of them...:)
anyway keep up the good work...:)
can't wait for more...:)

jjluf July 14 2011, 04:20:40 UTC

Jae's happy too~ lets just hope min feels the same way in the morning. Thank you for loving this~ it means alot to me <3~!

whatifgirl86 July 8 2011, 07:58:06 UTC

OMG yay for the update, I was waiting for it^^

Finally Changmin caved. Glad that everything worked out for both of them. Can't believe Changmin forgot about Yoochun, well at least I think he forgot, and also can't believe that Yoochun stayed until they had finished:D

prettyyoosu July 8 2011, 08:20:23 UTC

Chunnie is a perv, lol.
it's a surprise he didn't peep.^^

jjluf July 14 2011, 04:26:00 UTC

Lol yoochun's presence is something min forgets about alot, even though he loves him~ kk and of course pervy chun would stay! lol yeah he did cave pretty fast but let's just hope he doesnt regret it~~ thanks for commenting!

prettyyoosu July 8 2011, 08:14:33 UTC

finally, they did it^^...
now, i'm waiting for a dolphin scream, lol.

jjluf July 14 2011, 04:26:52 UTC

Lol hopefully it would be too long til you get to hear it! <33

prettyyoosu July 14 2011, 09:35:13 UTC

for a dolphin scream...i'd be willing to wait~!
however, i know you wouldn't let me wait too long *dagger looks*

jaceni July 8 2011, 13:41:16 UTC

SPOT! ^______^

Yay! Smut! XD jaceni July 8 2011, 23:59:56 UTC

^_____^ Can't stop smiling. You did a good job with the smut for it being your first! Can't wait to see more of it. XD LOL. At least it'll hold me off for a while. XDD

Haha, I liked Minjae's interaction in this chapter. ^^ And I'm still shocked that Min did it practically in front of Yoochun! XDDD That was a shocker. :D Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. ^^

Re: Yay! Smut! XD jjluf July 14 2011, 04:28:39 UTC

Glad you liked it~! Silly pervy Chunnie XD thanks for commenting! <333