Black Coffee

Jan 09, 2012 00:44


Author // Jjonghoeing
Word Count // ~3,300
Rating // PG
Genre // Fluff
Pairing // Onew x Minho; Onho
Summary // Still trying to figure out what he was going to order-he hadn’t been to a coffee shop in at least two years-he overheard the tall man in front of him placing his order. “Grande coffee, black.”
Author’s Note // This is a birthday present for ( Read more... )

genre: fluff, rating: pg, pairing: onho, onho

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jjonghoeing January 9 2012, 08:46:43 UTC
spot for towelettepower! ^o^

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towelettepower January 9 2012, 21:31:40 UTC
/sighs in content/ i has finally read this 8DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

lkfjlskdfd I LOVED THIS AND YOU AMBER CREY it's 3k+ words oh man... i want more tbh ;AAAAA;

It was so out of character for him-he never approached people -- sounds like me tbh LOL

sob i want to write a better comment but i'm really tired (mostly because of bella).

onew was adorable in here ;~~~~; want to squish him. minho being all smooth and everything sldkfjsld. crey onew and minho are perfect (for each other) okai ???

lol you complaining on twitter about how descriptive you write. i actually love it \8DDDDDD sigh i love any onho tbh LOL

CREY THANK YOU AMBER SO MUCH THIS AND THE OTHER THING ON TUMBLR AND LSDJFLSKD LOVE YOU SO FUCKIN MUCH OKAI SOBS ♥

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jjonghoeing January 10 2012, 07:18:14 UTC
im glad you liked it heaven ;AAA; pmfsl i was worried cause when i re-read it this fic wasn't really as sweet as i wanted it to be. BUT IT'S OKAY CAUSE YOU LIKED IT SO I FEEL ACCOMPLISHED XX.
pmfsl maybe ill make a sequel to this for you ((probably not)) but omg sigh this fic wasn't as descriptive as i thought (good thing) but i still strayed so far away from like talking about onew x minho as much as i shouldve LMAOO. YOU'RE WELCOME CAUSE YOU DESERVE IT AND YOU'RE 17 NOW, SO. ahh i love you too <3

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jjonghoeing January 9 2012, 08:47:00 UTC
spot for rudyard~

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rudyard January 10 2012, 20:18:39 UTC
Amber e_e you fucking liar. Talking about how your writing isn't that good. YOU ARE SUCH A LIAR.
Please write more ;w;
I really really liked this.
This was cute , oh so very cute (:

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jjonghoeing January 10 2012, 20:22:39 UTC
lacnjascascbcajnsf, i just believe there's a lot of room for improvement with me!^^ but it's true that i did get better in the past couple months at writing. (i think.)
thank you cai im glad you liked it uwu~~

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jinkibumiminho January 10 2012, 00:45:35 UTC
Squeee!!! Loving it! Especially because I am IN a franchised coffee shop right now, forced to over hear conversations about bathroom remodeling and how much toilets cost.

I chuckled out loud at Long Locked Beauty. Just as you intended.

Thanks for this tasty bit of fluffy yummy goodness.

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jjonghoeing January 10 2012, 07:15:27 UTC
Ah, yes, whenever I go into a coffee shop all I hear is background noise :c
and ah i'm glad you laughed! ^^
Thank you so much~
i'm not usually very good with fluff so i'm happy that you liked it :D

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oneu January 11 2012, 15:14:29 UTC
Hyung-nni needs to have a birthday more often *O* if it means more fics like this! XD I'm such a sucker for cute and fluff ^^ and this was really cute~ and just awesome.

I really enjoyed reading it ;D I loved all of Onew's thoughts T___T and how he didn't know what to order. ♥ Onew wae so precious and cute? :D

Oh and OMG I love the whole Minho Doctor and Onew Nurse thing! XD I'd love to see them working together. lol. Anyway this was cute XD ♥
Thank you for posting & sharing it! :D \^o^/

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jjonghoeing January 12 2012, 07:09:47 UTC
Aww omg thank you ;u; this means a lot! Really~
And YES tbh I loved that idea a lot too LMAO I wanted to do a doctor/nurse AU but I decided against it (for now) ^^
No need to thank me :3 thank hyung-nni for having a birthday <3

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oneu January 12 2012, 07:14:36 UTC
Aww no problem :D I thought it was cute T___T; and it just yeah appealed to me \o/

Hahah yeah ;_; doctor/nurse au's sound like fun~~ XDD except I'd always make Jinki the doctor since he's so smart^^;

Okay ;D I'll thank hyung-nni for having her birthday! :D she can have another soon :P LOL once a month XD!! (Although I guess that puts pressure on us T__T; so maybe... once every 2~3 mths lol)
♥ ^^;

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