Challenge 625 - betray.

Apr 10, 2019 17:00

Another Sentinel (by JKlog)
Blair Sandburg looked at the sheet of fax paper and couldn’t believe what he saw. But it was true, there was the evidence before his eyes. Besides, he would never have expected that the nurse who had sent him Jim's data four years ago would still remember that he was interested in that. It was incredible. He would have ( Read more... )

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unbelievable2 April 11 2019, 07:43:10 UTC

This is a great story and a novel way of bringing the boys together! Your OCs work very well indeed and I am glad we finally meet The Nurse! Well done on the artwork, too!

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jklog_maria April 12 2019, 23:02:40 UTC
Yes, I always wondered who the mysterious Nurse was.
Thanks for your lovely comment.

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mvernet April 12 2019, 00:25:12 UTC
Hey, Chief! Not sure if this is the right place to comment but here goes.

I really liked how you used the nurse who sent Blair info on Jim, very clever. I loved the first kiss scene, they do have everything but the rings, and I liked how they decided to give love a try. Very much like J&B. Great use of the prompt!

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jklog_maria April 12 2019, 23:10:28 UTC
I think it's the right place, don't worry!
There are a lot of characters that are only mentioned only once in the series, but they make a great performance in fanfic, don't they? As, for example, the uncle that taught Blair to drive big trucks. So, I decided to give the nurse a chance.
And the love scene, it was difficult, 'cause they had both dated a woman previously. But I had to get them together, some way.
Thanks for your lovely comment!

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