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FIC: Keep Your Enemies Closer (Adam/Kris, PG-13), 6/7

Sep 17, 2009 12:50

Author: Clio
Title: Keep Your Enemies Closer, Chapter 6: Pushers Must Advertise
Pairing: Adam Lambert/Kris Allen; established Ryan Seacrest/Simon Cowell
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Simon Cowell, manager of pop star hopefuls and owner of the hot downtown Club Idol, has been framed for a crime he didn't commit. Can new kid Kris Allen convince rival ( Read more... )

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allysonsedai September 20 2009, 17:25:11 UTC
Eeeee! This is soooo good! I couldn't even pause to comment on the other chapters b/c I couldn't stop reading long enough!

Things I LOVE:

The "this is how it happened" segments! It fits right in with the style of the story and lets us in on backstory, PLUS feeds right into the start of the chapter. So genius!

Adam cooking all that healthy food (and Kris's reaction to it). So adorable and full of love!

That Kris/Adam/Ryan only cuddled and had a big manly slumber party. Hee. Much more fitting for the characters and story than a gang bang. :)

Adam & David C's dynamic - wonderful like an old married couple.

And, as always, the song interludes! I love listening to them!

I'm sure there's more I'm forgetting, but sincerely, great job, Clio!

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jlh October 22 2009, 20:34:49 UTC
I'm so pleased you liked those segments! I wasn't sure they'd go over but they seem to have really worked, so yay!

I'm also glad the slumber party seemed right to you and all these other things, hurray hurray hurray!

Thanks so much!!

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empath89 October 6 2009, 02:43:20 UTC
Slowly catching up. Sorry it's taking me so long. I looooved this chapter. Moving on to the next one.

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jlh October 22 2009, 20:35:24 UTC
Thank you so much for commenting, I hugely appreciate it! and of course, I'm so glad that you are enjoying it!!!!

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