September Week 1 - Brigit's Flame JFF entry - "Trouble, Party of Two"

Sep 07, 2014 22:54

Brigit's Flame Entry (JFF) "Trouble, Party of Two"
Prompt: "Ya Got Trouble"
Genre: Alt-history memoir
WC:1,813
Warnings: not really

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topic:"ya got trouble", short story, brigit's flame, week 1, 2014_09

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jlly_coppercorn September 8 2014, 11:49:47 UTC
Thanks :)
Moms are awesome, but only when you're the mom.

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jlly_coppercorn September 8 2014, 12:52:14 UTC
I was a teenager when my son was born, so I'll admit to being a fuck up on a case-by-case basis as mom's go, but I did the best I knew to do and I loved him quite emphatically. My mother spent most of my life trying to convince me that the people I cared most about did not like me and only said they loved me out of obligation. It's insidious behaviour. You can never get rid of the doubt once that seed is planted. For this story I took liberties by combining events. My son (who is not named Max) was actually six when I overheard her telling him I did not love him. He was old enough for us to talk about, for me to clarify and dispel doubts. He told me she'd been whispering it to him for a long time. We moved away shortly after.

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rubyelf September 8 2014, 19:40:13 UTC
I like the line "You're my favorite kind of trouble".

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jlly_coppercorn September 10 2014, 11:59:31 UTC
Thank you :)
And thank you for reading.
I haven't gotten to do my reading yet.

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bluegerl September 11 2014, 16:34:07 UTC
Well. as someone once said. 'Some Mothers do have em!' (Other not so good mothers I mean!)

Tis sad... so sorry it happened.

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mistvieh September 12 2014, 14:31:10 UTC
My mom is too big a dingbat to be truly mean. XD

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