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jload

Triangle chp13

Oct 19, 2010 08:16

One year later.

Noah was surprised to see Luke walk in the front door of Mirage.
He could tell Luke was surprised to see him as well.
"How are you?" Noah said a little stiffly.
"Good, good."
There was an awkward silence. Noah noticed that Luke looked good. Really good. Not just his looks, those hadn't changed, but his aura. More directed, more mature, ( Read more... )

rating: nc-17, fan fiction, !author/artist: jload

Comments 26

jeri_1116 November 10 2010, 00:51:28 UTC

Oh, and loved that they were all cool in the and there wasn't a bad guy.

jload November 10 2010, 02:08:50 UTC

Yeah, I thought that was really important too, and much more like reality, where face it, life is complicated! :)

sleeper6 November 10 2010, 01:56:24 UTC

Hey, it's pretty interesting the way things did turn out, and I could definitely see a future for Reid/Noah though I'm just way too much into LuRe. But the way you wrote it made everything plausible. I enjoyed the angst, the twists and the surprises and the humanity of all 3--they all seemed lost but yet found themselves through each other; does that make sense?

Original idea with a satisfying ending. Good job!

jload November 10 2010, 02:10:48 UTC

You totally divined what I was trying to get at, which makes me happy. I am grateful that a dedicated LuReist still gave the fic a chance. Thanks for reading and commenting. I appreciate it!

amydambly December 16 2010, 05:20:24 UTC

Where can I find the rest of this story...from the beginning??

jload December 16 2010, 19:18:08 UTC

Oh and I forgot, the other two chapters are on my lj page http://jload.livejournal.com/ in case you didn't notice them (Chapters 11 and 12).

Someday I'll have to move them all into the same spot or post them on atwt slash or something. ;)

jload December 16 2010, 19:20:05 UTC

Hi amydambly,

If you go to the following link:
http://community.livejournal.com/lure_atwt/1207395.html
you will see that the chapters are all linked to at the top.

Jen

ohlovey452 December 22 2010, 20:15:32 UTC

I love this story. I loved Luke & Reid on ATWT, but most of the stories that have been written, got Noah a moron, a criminal, a rapist. You name, he's done it. I like the stories were they all end up friends. Noah was not a bad character on ATWT, it was the writing and the acting that was bad. Thank you for this story. You are good. Sorry you could not finish your story on LURE, but some people act like Luke & Reid are real people, not fictional. So they get very emotional. I love most of the stories that are written on LURE. Keep up with your writing.

jload December 22 2010, 21:34:42 UTC

Hey Ohlovey, wow, thanks for your kind words. They mean a lot to me and I am glad you enjoyed this fic. I completely agree with you about the characterization of Noah and also about certain, ahem, fans of LuRe who seem to have lost a little objectivity, to put it nicely. Oh well, life goes on. I am still crafting another fic called Birthday Boy. I will certainly let you know when I finally post it! ;) Jen