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Oct 14, 2003 16:36

Title; Games
Author: JMA
Email: thecrypt@iinet.net.au
Pairing: H/T, T/F,
Classificationl: fourth chapter in Game 22. series. (click link for prev. chapters)
Summary: The First time.
Special Thanks: To the darling Beta’s Anne Marsh and Amber minttown1 jussen .May your jars be easy to open.

( Korea was a place of opposites... )

Comments 4

Whoa! Vivid! jussen October 14 2003, 22:18:49 UTC

Really well done. I thought this was the most realistic sex scene I've read. I know I haven't spoken to anyone who's been penetrated for the first time who thought it was all pretty and magical etc etc. It hurts! It hurts but you want to do it anyway, probably a good analogy for the whole thing. Characterisation worked well, as always. I think a lot of guys who've fooled around with a chick at their mates house or whatever know about the rapid derobing and rerobing. It was all very true to life, with a good dash of humour. Definitely a thumbs up!

Re: Whoa! Vivid! ashilleong October 15 2003, 01:20:33 UTC

Thanks pet. *sniff* No-one wants to read mah story! Wahhhhaaaa!

Re: Whoa! Vivid! jussen October 15 2003, 19:47:59 UTC

I'm sorry sweetie. I don't know why they won't, the quality's fantastic, and it's not even that graphic. Anyway, it's their loss. Your stories are probably my favorite thing to read on here, and given that they're slash, that's gotta say something good about them. Take care.

Re: Whoa! Vivid! jma October 16 2003, 18:59:30 UTC

cheers pet.