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Oct 23, 2003 11:33

Title; Discovery
Author: JMA
Email: thecrypt@iinet.net.au
Pairing: H/T, T/F,
Classificationl: chapter 5 in Game 22. series. click link for prev. chapters

Summary: Hawkeye walks in on something he shouldn't have.
Special Thanks: To the darling Beta’s minttown1 and jussen . May your internet connection be speedy.

( He knew it was a bad idea... )

Comments 6

And again... jussen October 22 2003, 21:31:52 UTC

How do you keep managing to do work to this quality? I know I say this when I beta too, but I just can't believe how many different facets your stories are strong in. The sex scene was very well done, I would call it 'vivid' rather than 'graphic', in that it doesn't feel dirty. I know how you feel about writing sex scenes, but this was far from porn, like the difference between 'Romance' and 'Sorority Sex Kittens'. Two munted feet up!
(Two munted feet = good)

Re: And again... ashilleong October 22 2003, 21:39:42 UTC

and now if we could get anyone else to read the damn thing.... Waaaa!

Re: And again... jussen October 22 2003, 23:01:03 UTC

Aww Sweetie. I'm sure you'll get a good response from the lists, I don't know why you aren't on here. Keep it up, just the same

Good! Quite good. absolutelyvile January 5 2004, 17:31:53 UTC

No idea how I found this story, but I am SO glad that I did. I've been looking for a decent MASH fic for at least 5 years now. :)

wow anonymous February 9 2004, 22:29:42 UTC

I just discovered this story and wow, this is some excelent stuff, very vivid but not in a porno type of way....I love this

Ange (angeldun@hotmail.com)

Frank anonymous May 1 2004, 01:19:24 UTC

Sorry I'm anonymous but I don't belong to this site. I've read your MASH story and WOW! Hubba! It is so erotic and you have the characters written perfectly. I keep rereading the darn thing, dunno why! Keep writing, superb!

Love Lisa XXXXX