W. T. F. -- CRYONICS =/= TIME TRAVEL!!!!!

[jmercedesd]

Dear author -

Your story has potential. Granted, it desperately needs a proof reader and you obviously should not be allowed near a thesaurus, but it has a a great plot, solid characters and brings up some interesting ideas.

HOWEVER --

“Cryonics is a form of time travel. And believe me, if there’s a way to go forward unharmed, there’s definitely a

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[hime_no_nishi]

Who is writing this? Even I know that cryogenic stasis isn't time travel. WTF.

[jmercedesd]

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3550345/1/Misery_Business

Naruto fan-tard.

Having a rather interesting conversation about the theories it brings up over at fanficrants, though. :3

[askerian]

Ahaha. A few months ago I ranted about that fic too, though another aspect of it. Namely the "omg he's BLOND and no one else is BLOND because we're all mixed races now therefore he's SUPER DESIRABLE." Um, where are the hairdressers ready to bleach everyone who asks?

I didn't stop reading it for that, though, I stopped because Sakura was evil for no real reason, the plot with Sasuke started making no sense, and Naruto was so far into OOC-Land he could have been named Connor or Manifred and I wouldn't have noticed.

Anyway I seem to remember she had good ideas for the worldbuilding, she just didn't follow through with realistic consequences. It's disappointing, yeah? it could have been superawesome, but... no. ;_;

[jmercedesd]

Yeah, I started getting those vibes, too. Though, I did love the introduction of Gai and Lee. :D Made me smile. But, yeah, OOC-ness, character bashing, wild straying from what could have been such a shiny plot... TT.TT

Ah well. I'm going back to clean my braid with old fic favs.

[kabaryu]

*blink*

You've been hanging around me a little too long, haven't you? ^_~

[jmercedesd]

I really really have. *LOL* I realized that, thought about it, and said "wtf, it's fun to rant anyway". XD