Flight 109 - Destination: First Love [Chapter 12]

[jmonogatari]

AUTHOR'S NOTE: Here I am again, keeping my promise that I won't take that long for another update :) Gimme love, gimme love! :D My fic is, as you might've realized is unbeta-ed, so if I make some mistakes, please don't hesitate to let me know :) The story is inspired by yeppie. As usual, comments, inputs and criticisms are highly appreciated. And if you

Comments

[lily_nee]

First ? \o/
Interesting chapter, it's nice to see Sho's point of view, plus some part of their past.

Don't have many things to say this time, I'm a bit tired today, sorry ^^"

I'm looking forward the next one!

[jmonogatari]

Yay you're first :) It's been a while right? :D you should thank my weird sleeping schedule for the past week XD LOL

Anyways it is not an easy chapter to comment on, I must say :D so you don't need to be sorry :)
I'll see you in next chap! Thanks!

[matsujun19]

update~!!!! YAYYY~!!

//off to read~

[matsujun19]

SERIOUSLLY~!!! THIS IS MY MoST FAV CHAPTER!!!!

the way you describe sho's character really amazed me~
can wait for the next chapter...
i want to know what will be Jun's decision~
and how about Rei and other members as well~

*4thumbs up for this chapter!!*

[jmonogatari]

Is it? Wow, I am glad you like it as I am not 100 percent confident bout this :)
I'll try to update as soon as I can..
Thanks for reading/commenting!

[machomiya]

Here's big brother sho chan^^..

i was awake last night and read this,, after that
i continued to sleep xd..

*He never ever sees the youngest member of Arashi has that look in his eyes ever again. Not even when he is with Kitashiro Rei.

this ><...

[jmonogatari]

Hey!
I know, I know, I am being such a meanie to Rei XD

[janipanda]

I can't describe how deep this chapter for me was. So many realizations, so many insights. Just deep. Real deep.

Great job on this!

[jmonogatari]

I'm glad if you find it so. I was kinda afraid that I tried too hard for this chap. Or whether it is not interesting enough *shrugs* But it is worth a try I guess *grins*

[janipanda]

It might not have the lovey dovey factor or the suspense factor but it made me think and its nice to have a different point of view from another member once in awhile.

Deep Sho is deep.

[jmonogatari]

Yeah, I was kinda not in the mood to write lovey dovey chap when I wrote this earlier this week. But now I am in the mood for one, so be prepared for lovey dovey factor and a lot of angst next update XD LOL

About diff pov, I wanted to have at least an almost equal shares between the arashi members in my fics (altho the main lead maybe will always be Jun XD). And the first time I wrote Flight 109, I've decided to put in more Sho and Aiba as I don't write much about them in On/Off XD

[nishiki1027]

I don't know which to choose either now... too bad for Jun...

too bad for Minako... more for Rei...

Be waiting what's Jun gonna do...

[jmonogatari]

Thanks for reading/commenting.
Yes, I supposed it is getting harder and harder to choose between them. I am having that problem as well XD
Until next chap~!