Flight 109 - Destination: First Love [Chapter 12]

[jmonogatari]

AUTHOR'S NOTE: Here I am again, keeping my promise that I won't take that long for another update :) Gimme love, gimme love! :D My fic is, as you might've realized is unbeta-ed, so if I make some mistakes, please don't hesitate to let me know :) The story is inspired by yeppie. As usual, comments, inputs and criticisms are highly appreciated. And if you

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[jmonogatari]

Yay!
Thanks for reading/commenting! Until then!

[laurene123]

yay! you updated again. and i'm soooo late! will read and comment later :)

[jmonogatari]

Yeah I did as promised, yay! XD
Will be looking forward to your comment :)

[laurene123]

really, really late but here i go

[jmonogatari]

Wow, this is such a long comment! Thank you :)
I am glad if you love it :) it sure means a lot.. As I have mentioned in other comments, I am not 100 percent confident with this particular chapter..

Now, now, let Minako shows you more next chap :) I've only touched that matter in this chap a bit, will explore more in later chaps. And not that I am defending her, but actually Jun is the one who kissed her first..

It is the key question that Sho asked, btw. Would you? Would you accept if your boyf loves someone else in his heart aside from you?

(I think if my boyf is Jun, I will force myself to accept XD LOL)

[mikaa22]

I'm late again! Sorry! :((

You don't have to think twice about how you wrote this chapter, it's by far, one of my favorites! ;) There's depth and amazing interpretation. I especially like this line:

"Her words are simple. Yet, her eyes speak differently. It is as if they find something new. Something they just realize. It speaks a million of other unspoken less simple words."

I love how you portrayed Sho's insights here, very well written. *thumps up*

Now, it makes me want to read the next chapter so badly! :))

P.S. Sho & Minako's interaction makes me think that they also got this chemistry. If Jun does end up with Rei in the end, I would love to see Sho & Minako together. HAHAHA!

[jmonogatari]

I am glad if you think good things about this chapter! really!
It is actually one of my favorite to write as well, as I wanted to do a comparison for the two OCs facing with similar situations. But wanted it to be able to be interpreted in different ways as well..
Well that's what I intended at least XD

Will try to update as soon as I can :)

If Minako ends up with Sho, there will be another drama between jun and Sho then, will it? XD LOL

[mikaa22]

Your intentions are well sent! :) The readers seem to understand Minako's feeling now and how hard it is to be in her shoes in the past. :)

I wonder what will happen between Jun and Minako after that kiss? And I'm even more interested when they landed in Tokyo with Nino and Rei fetching them in the airport! Spell AWKWARD! :)))

Haha! By how you portrayed Sho in the story, he's a man of principles and if he does felt something with Minako, I'm sure he wouldn't allow that feelings to damage his friendship with Jun. Anyways, I'm just rambling too much, am I? :p It's definitely up to you, really! You're the writer. lol. I'll just let my imagination happen in my fics. HAHA! :))

[jmonogatari]

I promise to give you that next chap and the one after it :)

I dunno I've always viewed Sho in that kind of way. And about his chemistry with Minako, it is bound to be that way right, especially after that stupid prank involving them in earlier chap? I guess this chap has some kind of pay off to what happened then.

Imagination is good, huh? Fics started with one and should end with one! It's one of the things that keeps this wonderful fandom going! So keep the wild imagination (and rambling) on!

[kyassuru]

so sho thinks that it is his fault that minako left matsujun...i just think that he should not blame himself about that...i don't even understand what interpretation she has in sho's words that made her leave jun...or maybe i'm just still too preoccupied with last chapters ending that i'm not able to understand properly what i'm reading...

anyways, i'll still be waiting for the next chapter...
thanx...

[jmonogatari]

It is written with the intention of being vague, i know. You kinda need to read between the lines (and a bit scrolling up and down to get the pay offs and all) LOL XD I know this might not be the most romantic chapter, but I guess you'll understand better about this chapter after you read the future chapters (which I am procrastinating to write right now XD)..

But thanks for reading/commenting as always :) will try to update asap.

[projectgap]

Hello! :)

I think this is the first chapter where I actually fell in love with Sho and not Jun or Nino, haha! He was so awesome when he was talking with Rei... XD

And I also love how you threw the question back at Rei wether she would continue to like Matsujun after knowing this, because all this while, we're only thinking if Matsujun will still like her.

But I feel a little sad, I couldn't find what it was that Minako found in Sho's words, must read a few more times! :D

Good luck with continuing!

[jmonogatari]

Hello! How've you been? :)

Sho is kakkoi, right? He is kinda starting to rub on me as well, I mean the real Sho XD
But actually I like his dorky side better than his kakkoi side.
I think the same goes to Jun, I mean the real Jun, of course :D The same goes to every other member in Arashi, I mean the real Arashi XD

Don't feel sad. You'll know in later chapters, I guess. Or else that would be failing on my side XD LOL I know, I know, I am being too vague at times, it happens. I hope you guys can understand :D

Ganbarimasu!