Comments | jmonogatari: ON/OFF Screen [Chapter 14]

jmonogatari

ON/OFF Screen [Chapter 14]

May 04, 2011 01:37

AUTHOR'S NOTE: This chapter has an NC-17 in one part. So you need an ID to see that part :D
Well as not all of it is NC-17 (only one section, the rest is PG-13 (or R, I am not really that sure) as usual), there's a link for the mature readers to read the NC-17 part to another post (the link says PART 14B). Which has to be viewed as a friend of mine ( Read more... )

arashi: matsumoto jun, arashi, fanfic: onoffscreen, length: chaptered, pairing: junxoc

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sherrifjoke May 4 2011, 10:09:32 UTC

hey im 24 - really old...would like to continue and have added you as a friend...add me back?
stacy<3

jmonogatari May 4 2011, 10:12:39 UTC

Have added you. Happy reading :)

sherrifjoke May 4 2011, 10:21:22 UTC

at the end of this ....im awestruck...the whole chapter was adorable...cant wait for the next one!

jmonogatari May 4 2011, 10:29:25 UTC

Aw thanks so much for commenting your impression of this chapter. As this one is REALLY HARD to write for me XD So I hope I did fine.. Especially that NC-17 part, that's the first time i ever wrote something like that LOL
This means a lot to me, thank you :)

To read part 14B melodyofmysoul May 4 2011, 10:18:39 UTC

I'm loving the development of the story, and I'm quite interested in how you wrote your NC scene. Hope you'll add me as a friend. :)

Re: To read part 14B jmonogatari May 4 2011, 10:20:56 UTC

Sorry, but you are over 17 already? You forgot to mention it :)

Re: To read part 14B jmonogatari May 4 2011, 10:23:30 UTC

Never mind, I've checked your user info and found that you are well over 17 XD so I've added you. Happy reading :)

lily_nee May 4 2011, 10:36:28 UTC

Cut in my reading XD I added you as a friend, can you add me back ? I'm already 24... :3
Thanks ! I'll come back commenting after finishing reading! ^__^

jmonogatari May 4 2011, 10:41:58 UTC

Just added you :) happy reading..!

lily_nee May 4 2011, 11:06:47 UTC

Well... what can I say... Hot ? xDDD

More seriously, I love that chapter. They are both of them so cute <3 I love their relationship. The end killed me, when he gives her the key and when she confesses to him.

But this appointment with Johnny-san, I feel something not so great happening... Hope I'm just a bit paranoïac xD

Can't wait for friday! XD
Good luck at work tomorrow ^___^

jmonogatari May 4 2011, 11:16:54 UTC

Thank you for commenting your impression :) The chapter is even harder to write than the last one XD

Want Jun-kun's key as well :( ^_^

to read part 14B myka551 May 4 2011, 10:47:48 UTC

damn I'm not first XD

I'm turning 17 in 19 days...is that okay??? DX

p.s. can I add you as a friend too? LOL

myka xx

Re: to read part 14B jmonogatari May 4 2011, 10:49:57 UTC

Naah, you have to try again after 19 days then XD LOL just kidding..
I've added you. Happy reading :)

ririn18 May 4 2011, 11:22:44 UTC

Haii!!!
My name is ririn, I'm 21th this year
So I'm allowed to read your nc-17 fic so please add me back quick!!!
I'm soo curious!!! Okok

jmonogatari May 4 2011, 11:23:43 UTC

I just did :) Thanks for reading~!