ON/OFF Screen [Chapter 22]

[jmonogatari]

AUTHOR'S NOTE: There's a lot of angst in this chapter, I almost cried as I wrote the words. Is that even possible? As usual, thank you for reading! Comments, criticism and inputs would be highly appreciated. If you haven't read the previous chapters, you can always refer to the master post

Comments

[kyassuru]

i just read chapter 21 and now here is chapter 22...

so the next chapter will be the last?

i hope that they can work things out...i love to see a happy ending...

[jmonogatari]

Oh you notice XD yeah, the next one will be last. I will post it along with the epilogue :) Wouldn't spoil the ending to you right now though.. whether it will be happy, sad or something in between :)

[raene_9]

i can feel it that Jun has his reasons and glad that Nino sees that...thanks Neener... :)
but this whole chap made me cry...this is so hurtful & hell for both of them. Rei, he just don't want you to give up something just for him ~ that's so selfish of him if he do...dang it Rei! read the lines, see the actions...even if he's not saying the word, he loves you...Action speaks louder than words...open your eyes please Rei...you never lost him & you never will. he doesn't leave, he's you're obsessive fan, right... :)
can't wait for the next chap...thanks

[jmonogatari]

Aw thanks for reading.. Does it really make you cry? It means a lot for me if it really does. No one ever cries over something I wrote LOL..

[raene_9]

i'm a cry-baby...sorry...i cry almost to anything...too much laugh...too much anger etc... :)
i loved this chap...thanks

[jmonogatari]

Hehe you don't need to be sorry for being a cry baby. I wish I was one :( only hanadan able to make me cry over and over again after 100th viewings XD

[lily_nee]

This chapter is heartbreaking, I can really feel Rei's sadness, I practicaly cry along with her ;___;
But now that I calmed down (from yesterday chapter XD) and that Nino explained it clearly, I can't blame Jun anymore... T___T In fact, I just want to cry with him too. Such a lovely baka <3

However, this was a beautiful chapter, maybe the better of this fic for me.

But then, I read your answer to kyassuru, and even if I had thought a little about a probable soon ending, I'm a bit sad that next chapter will be the last... *tearful eyes* I'll miss Rei and Jun, really.

Nevertheless, I can't wait for the next chapter xD
Thank you so much for sharing this story! <3

[jmonogatari]

Thanks for making this chapter the better of this fic for you. Although I quite like how this chapter turns out, my personal favorite has been Ch. 2: the song by the beach and that whole sequence of their first date in chapter 8-9. I dunno why. Those chapters are the one that left a mark as I wrote it :) But when I wrote that break up scene in this ch, I almost cried as I imagine the scene in my head :(

And yeah.. I actually was trying to end this fic in this chapter, but could not contain everything in one chapter, so I have to split it in two.. It's been 22 chapters already, and I think i should end this before anyone gets bored of Rei and Jun XD LOL

Nevertheless, thank you so much for reading this story up to this point. It won't reach to this point without your support :)

[machomiya]

hoaa,,i want to see them together just make it true please^^, so tomorrow is the ending right?? i'll be waiting cos tomorrow is holidaaay~~ *yey*.. btw happy holidaaay~~~~

[jmonogatari]

Ano.. I am not sure I can finish it by tomorrow.. It is going to be a longer one as it also contains an epilogue XD
But let's just see :)

Happy holiday!

[janipanda]

Ahhh.....this chapter is indeed emotional and yet Nino has a way of explaining it logically that puts both logic and emotions completely together.

Sigh.

WHY THE HELL AM I STILL FOCUSED ON NINO? WHY DID MY HEART BREAK WHEN HE HAS TO BE THE ONE TO COMFORT HER?

-end of rant-

Sorry for the caps. You gotta make a story for nino! pls! Although my heart goes out to Jun and Rei, I want a happy ending for nino too!

Great chapter and I cried too! -hug-

[jmonogatari]

Eh? Have I converted you into a Nino-ichibaner? LOL XD
But yeah, my thought goes to you as I wrote that part of the chapter XD So that one is for you :)
I focused a lot on Nino myself considering this is supposed to be a Jun-centric fic XD He is just keeps on appearing! I love writing his character. Almost as much as I love writing Jun..

We will see what I can do for Nino, k? :)

Thanks for reading, the tears and the comment as always~! -hugs back-

[janipanda]

Blasmephy! XD Jun is always going to be my ichi-ban! But if Sho doesn't do anything soon, Nino will replace him the second seat! XP

Although that part of Nino comforting her as a nice touch with focusing on Nino, it really sucks to be the comforter, specially when you have feelings for the one you are comforting. Thank you though for writing that for me though. I feel special!

Nino is fun to write. Jun I think is more sophisticated and deep while Nino is loud but complex.

I just can't help but comment! I like the story a lot!

[jmonogatari]

LOL.. Ohno once almost replace my Nino's second place, but Nino grab it with all his might again after I watch Ao no Honoo, hands down the best film ever made with any Arashi members as a cast, well for me at least..