ON/OFF Screen [Chapter 23]

May 18, 2011 21:30

AUTHOR'S NOTE: First of all, I am sorry for the late update. And second of all, surprise surprise, this is not the last chapter XD I am sorry, I am sorry but turns out as I wrote what I wanted to write it becomes so long I have to break it up into two. LOL. Besides I like the number 24 better than 23 :p As usual, comments, criticism and inputs ( Read more... )

arashi: matsumoto jun, arashi, fanfic: onoffscreen, length: chaptered, pairing: junxoc

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myka551 May 18 2011, 15:23:34 UTC
LIKE 8D (even though it is ending soon T.T'''')

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jmonogatari May 18 2011, 15:40:21 UTC
Hehe.. Bright side: it is supposed to end with this chapter, but could not possibly write it all into one chap only XD

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raene_9 May 18 2011, 15:23:53 UTC
kyaaaa!!! this is so sweet and loving it totally...i was crying & laughing at the same time while reading...hahaha...but thank you...this is awesome...:)
and finally Jun said it. YATTA!!! :))
i'm sure he is proposing to her tonight...their last night together before the inevitable 2 yrs apart...update soon please...:))
can't wait..fidgeting now... :))

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jmonogatari May 18 2011, 15:43:02 UTC
I am glad if you like this chap.. kinda on a harder side to write, dunno why XD
Will update as soon as I am done with it.. the next one is harder than this one.. LOL
Hopefully it won't expand to another chap.. Getting nuts here, keep seeing Jun and Rei everywhere I go..

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raene_9 May 18 2011, 16:07:36 UTC
no worries...we do liked it... gambatte! :)

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kyassuru May 18 2011, 16:49:03 UTC
i was kinda expecting it to be the last...but surprisingly it's not...:D

arashi is really sweet...i love them all...

what could be jun's present for rei?i'm getting excited here all by myself like a total idiot...and i'm glad that they have made up after all the misery from being apart...

what could be jun's present for rei?i'm curious here...

and i just gotta ask this but will our nino have his own happy love story with ad-san because he just deserve to have one...

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jmonogatari May 19 2011, 01:05:51 UTC
Hehe yeah sorry for the false notice on last chapter. I really tried to make this the last, but that means omitting that arashi scene and I don't have the heart to do that :D

I've never done Nino's POV in this fic and I don't think I will do that in the last chapter, but things hopefully will sorted out even just a lil bit. If not, maybe I'll have a one-shot for him one day :)

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lily_nee May 18 2011, 19:38:23 UTC
Ahhh, I'm finally able to comment. My connection is just hell tonight >.<

Ohhh, there'll be an other one ! *happy*

And god, my heart went *doki doki* several times during my reading.

I'm sooo happy that they get together again, it'd be such a waste if not.

My comment is a mess tonight, sorry xD
I can't wait for the next. Thank you so much for all this story! <3

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jmonogatari May 19 2011, 01:08:13 UTC
Ah thanks so much for commenting even tho connection is not good. It is drag when that happens, right..

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janipanda May 19 2011, 03:12:28 UTC
I don't know where to start.

This, of all the chapters I've read in this story would...leave a lasting impression on me. Even if I, of course, imagined that special scene and replacing me with Rei, THIS CHAPTER, this sole chapter, had made me....yearn for something like this. Something Rei had with her lunch with Arashi. With Nino trying to act cool, Aiba bowling his eyes out(was just crying bec of him a couple of mins ago while watching his jdrama, My girl), the boring Sho and the quiet but scene stealer Ohno. Of course, not to forget the main star, Jun. It made me wish bad.

Dear writer, I think you have become a writer when people can relate and dream. Although I know you told us that this isn't the last chapter, let me tell you that you have touched this reader. Enough for me to not only review but relate to you.

Gambaro for the last stretch!

PS
That Boku subete song is now going to go on a loop in my head. XD

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jmonogatari May 19 2011, 04:10:50 UTC
Ah this comment is so beautiful, it is very sweet of you :) I don't know how to thank you.. You don't know how much it means to me. And it is wonderful when someone can relate to the writer through a writing. I think that is the main reason why a singer sings, a musician plays music, an actor acts, a writer writes, etc.
Even though this is just a fanfic, I am so happy that you can relate to me :) It is the best compliment ever I don't know whether I really deserve it or not..

About the lunch with Arashi, it took me a whole day to come up with those gifts! But I figure Aiba-chan would give the perfect gift to any Arashi fan, the life of an arashi fan (that is her hard drive :p), and i bet everyone can guess correctly what sho and ohno's gifts are before she opens it XD Anything else just seems wrong for me..

PS
That song is evil! I've cut out that AU CM part to become a ringtone.

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janipanda May 19 2011, 04:34:57 UTC
Its a compliment. Take it with grace. But how to do it with grace? I don't know. Just smile and put it in a good memory storage in your heart. <3

OHMIGOD. Is 5 HD with what....3 terabytes each be enough? Really?

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jmonogatari May 19 2011, 04:38:42 UTC
I would say 4 TB each XD If not all of them in HD, I think it would suffice, BARELY XD LOL

Compliments are impossible to take with grace btw :)

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